This is a first attempt. Comments and criticisms that are kind, courteous considerate and constructive would be encouraging.
This is a long story. It builds up slowly. There is a lot of romance. It is also a work of fiction. However references to locations, historical characters, art, music and science are as one would find in normal geography, history and science text books.
All characters indulging in sexual activities in this story are well above the age of consent. All sexual activities are consensual.
There are a number of words and phrases that are in the vernacular languages of India and they are mostly explained within the story itself. Some words have not been translated but they will not take away much from the story.
Those exposed to the customs and culture of India will understand some of the subtleties and nuances in the conversations and events better.
Neela
"Hi, good morning, I am calling with reference to your advertisement which states that you have a single room apartment to let out."
"Whom do you want this for?" The voice sounded musical.
"It is for me," I said.
"I am only letting it out to a woman." The tone was abrupt, almost rude.
"Oops, but that really wasn't clear in the advertisement. Anyway, I am really sorry to have bothered you." And with that the call came to an end.
A couple of days later, my phone buzzed. It was the same number that I had called earlier.
"Hi, I am Neela, we spoke the day before yesterday. If you are still looking for accommodation, I can consider your case, but I need to know if you are the kind of person I would like to have as a tenant."
"If you can give me your address, I could come over at a time convenient to you and we could discuss this."
"No way I am having a stranger over at my place," she laughed. "Can I meet you at 'The Delta' at three in the afternoon today? It is the coffee shop at the Phoenix Mall."
"Yes, of course. How do I recognise you?"
"Look for a lady in a canary yellow saree carrying a brown leather bound book. A rather large book.... You haven't told me your name yet?"
"Narasimha."
"Bye, see you at three." And she hung up.
The coffee shop was mostly empty, and she was there at a table next to a big glass window. She continued to watch me as I walked across smiling. I offered her my hand. She took it, a soft but firm handshake and then pointed to the chair across.
"Would you like some coffee?"
"Yes, a strong South Indian filter 'Kaapi,' I can order and bring it across, what would you like to have?"
"The same."
I walked over to the counter, picked up the order and walked back to the table.
"My previous tenant was lady," she began, "but if I do find a decent man, then why not?"
"Tell me about the place."
"It is a rather large well furnished room, with a well equipped washroom and a kitchenette, very comfortable for a single person. It also has a large balcony that overlooks a lot of greenery. It is built over a garage adjoining my place and has a separate entrance. It is air-conditioned, has its own electric meter and a phone/broadband connection that you need to pay for on actuals over and above the rent. There is a housekeeping service that will clean up your premises twice a week, on Tuesdays and Fridays, the same service that I use."
"Sounds good, I would like to see the place though. But before that, what kind of a person are you looking for as a tenant?" I smiled, to keep the question from sounding too aggressive.
"I know where you work from your Linked-in Profile. You don't seem to have any other social media accounts, no Facebook, no Instagram, no Twitter. So you need to tell me more about yourself."
"My parents have moved on. A few uncles, aunts, cousins with whom I am in touch with, whom I sometimes visit when I travel to their cities. Otherwise, when I am not working, I watch birds during the day and gaze at the stars during the night. An amateur birdwatcher and an amateur astronomer, and professionally the head of a large customer service team in my organisation."
"You can have an occasional guest over, but no drunken parties, or noisy stuff at my place."
"Other than an occasional beer on a very hot afternoon or a glass of wine or maybe two in a year, I don't drink. Can't hold the stuff, so no rum, no whisky, no gin....I don't smoke either."
"Why do you want to move to the outskirts of the city?"
"Many reasons why your locality makes sense. One, while it is a 50 minute drive to my place of work, most of it is on the freeway, so driving is less stressful. Two, your area has much less of environmental artificial lighting, I will able to see the stars better, three, I travel a lot and the access to the airport is closer and four, the wetlands where I go to for watching birds is a shorter drive from your area."
He paused for a while, then added, "More importantly, I am a simple no nonsense guy. I can be a good friend and neighbour should you need any help anytime, and I really am a perfect gentleman. If you need any references you can talk to my HR or any of my previous employers."
"Once we are done with our coffee, you can drive me home, and take a look at the place. If you like it, I will have my lawyer draw up the lease agreement for you to sign. I will call her and ask her to meet us there. She may ask you a lot more questions, so be prepared to answer them." Her laughter was infectious, I was beginning to like this lady.