So, I shall begin by apologizing for that stupid mistake on the first part. You'll have to omit the last part of part 1 (The part after Erin and the narrator cuddle). That was part of Part 2, which I have decided to rewrite completely.
So, based on the ratings of my first story, I'm guessing that my very first erotic story was received very well. I originally wasn't going to make more than two parts, but I've already started work on part 3, and part 4 flashes through my mind every now and then.
As for this part, it is a little short, but that's because I honestly didn't know what to write. The scene is somewhat limited. I can, however, guarantee that part 3 will be much longer
Feedback and constructive criticism are very much appreciated. I hope you enjoy reading this as much as I enjoyed writing it.
I'm pretty sure I was dreaming. I was in bed with Erin, just holding her in my arms. We were both naked, but all we were doing was talking quietly about nothing as though it were everything. I watched her slim lips move as she talked, her voice reverberating with my inner peace. I don't know what she was saying, all I know is that I was happy. She kissed my cheek, and that's when I woke. Erin was right there next to me, more real than my dream could ever be. I started thinking about how anything that happened since I asked her out to coffee less than a month ago could have possibly happened.
I must've been quietly contemplating too long because she asked me, "What are you thinking about?"
"I'm thinking about how it's possible that I can be woken up from a dream into something that is too good to be a dream."
She cocked her head in confusion, as if she were questioning my sanity. Suddenly, she smiled brightly, hugged me tightly, and said something inaudibly into my chest.
"What?" I asked.
She got up and straddled me, then kissed me passionately enough to make me dizzy. "That," she replied. My heart started pounding in my chest and I suddenly felt an urge to get her as close to me as the laws of physics would allow. I pulled her into me roughly enough to kill my urge, but gently enough to not hurt her in any way. As we kissed again, I felt her smile while her hands glided over my chest and waist. Even though I wasn't erect, I had never been so consumed by lust. I found myself uncontrollably moaning as our lips partly hid the erotic dancing of our tongues.