I love medieval or historic adventure/romance. I watched one some time back and disappointed by the lack of storyline, I boasted to my wife that even I could write a simple romantic drama that will be better. To prove my point, I told her two stories. This is the written form of better of those.
My wife loved it - I am not sure if she liked the story or she simply cares about my feelings.
Standard Warning : Anyone indulging in sex is above 18 years.
Standard Apology : English is not my first language and I am trying my hand in medieval style (inspired by Tolkien). Story is pretty long too. I apologise in advance for the mistakes that you see. I have no editors.
Aida
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Once upon a time, in a land far, far away, there was a powerful kingdom named Aurelia, ruled by King Halrix IV, a monarch of great might and wisdom. The Duchy of Thravenreach, located in the southernmost reaches of Aurelia, was a vassal state of the Kingdom and was home to Princess Aida.
Far to the south, beyond the borders of Aurelia, lived many tribal kingdoms--referred to as "savages" by the folk of Aurelia. The largest of these kingdoms was Flamewood, ruled by Chief Baran whose middle son was Captain Dale.
This is their tale.
Chapter 1
Duke Thelric of Velmorra was a man of great shrewdness and pragmatism, known far and wide for his ability to maintain Velmorra's independence, even as King Halrix sought to subjugate neighboring duchies and bring them under Aurelia's dominion. Thelric had cleverly negotiated an agreement with King Halrix: in exchange for offering elite military forces in times of war, Velmorra would remain autonomous. Though he was a distant relative of the king, Thelric was an Aurelian by blood, and his sharp wit and political acumen had earned him respect at court--and fear for his calculated coldness.
Having seen many a kingdom torn asunder by the wars of succession, Thelric was determined that Velmorra would not meet the same fate. His two sons, however, could prove to be a threat to that stability.
"You called for me, Father?" Akon, the elder son, asked as he entered the room.
"Come in, Akon," Thelric replied, his voice grave. He stood near the large window in his study, the rays of the setting sun casting long shadows across the stone floor. His younger son, Aron, stood stoically at his side, silent as ever.
Akon could already guess the subject of their conversation, and he had a feeling he knew the decision his father was about to make.
"I am growing old, Akon," Thelric said, his voice tinged with a quiet heaviness.
"You still have many summers yet to come, Father," Akon replied, trying to offer comfort.
"Perhaps," Thelric mused, turning to face his sons. "But I wish to be prepared. I wish for Velmorra to be prepared." He gestured to the lands beyond the window. "It took great sacrifice and fortune to keep Velmorra beyond the reach of King Halrix and the southern tribes. I want my successor to ensure its continued independence."
Akon and Aron stood at attention, hands clasped behind their backs, awaiting their father's next words.
"Akon," Thelric continued, his voice measured, "you are a thinker. Your diplomatic skills surpass my own, but you are no warrior. You do not seek conquest; instead, you seek to build through negotiation. But you are not fit to rule in times of conflict."
Akon bowed his head, understanding his father's words. "You speak truly, Father. I believe negotiation creates a better legacy than conquest."
Thelric turned to Aron, his eyes hardening. "You, Aron, are fiery, charismatic, and power-hungry. You are a warrior, well-liked by the Aurelian warlords. But you play a cruel game with no mercy."
Aron simply nodded, his face betraying no emotion.
"I have made my decision," Thelric's voice grew firm. "You will both accept it, or you will rebel against me." He paused, allowing the weight of his words to sink in.
Akon and Aron remained silent, their eyes locked on their father.
"Akon," Thelric said, "you are not worthy to be the next ruler of Velmorra. I hereby name Aron as my successor. He shall rule in my stead when I am gone."
A wide grin spread across Aron's face, though he quickly suppressed it to mask his satisfaction. Akon, however, remained unfazed. He had long expected this outcome.
"I thank you, Father," Aron said, his voice dripping with pride, but he stopped speaking when Thelric raised a hand.
"I am not finished yet," Thelric declared. "The eastern coastal town of Thravenreach, with its surrounding hills and forests, was once a separate duchy. It shall be again, under Akon's control. He has served me well and shown promise. Thravenreach will be a vassal state to King Halrix, just as Velmorra is."
Akon bowed deeply, his voice calm. "I accept, Father."
Aron, though displeased at losing Thravenreach, knew that the throne of Velmorra was a reward in itself, and he was content with the outcome. "As you wish, Father," he said.
Years passed, and Aron grew stronger, thanks to his many alliances through marriage and his growing wealth. His bloodline was secure, and his power grew alongside his desire for control.
Akon, on the other hand, took a different path. His marriage to Alia, the youngest daughter of the fearsome Naqari chief, was a political move that shocked the nobles of Aurelia. The Naqari were known for their stealth and deadly precision in battle, and their union immediately halted any potential raids on Thravenreach. Though many believed the marriage was merely political, few knew that Akon and Alia had long been in love. Their union brought balance, and it also gave birth to a daughter--a child who would grow to be known as Princess Aida.
Chapter 2
Little Aida, with her friend Brinna, played merrily in her chamber, the sweet sound of laughter ringing through the air. Brinna's mother, a trusted maid to Alia, kept watch, her sharp eyes always alert. Suddenly, loud voices echoed from Akon's study.
"Why must you go? Your army is but a small handful. Know that you can not face them," Alia's voice rang out, filled with anger.
"And you know why," Akon's voice answered, firm. "If Flamewood takes this part of the forest, we lose access to Velmorra. 'Tis an important trade route, not just for us but for the whole of Aurelia."
Alia, furious, grasped his hand tightly. "I will ride with thee. I know who we shall face this day."
"Nay, Alia," Akon replied, his tone softening. "Aron has promised his soldiers. You are not a trained fighter." Then, in a hushed whisper, he added, "I need you to take over should I not return."
Distraught, Alia kissed him fiercely, her tears mixing with the urgency of their parting.
Alas, Akon fell in the battle--his small company no match for the might of Flamewood's warriors. Velmorra's army, as it seemed, had not arrived. Perhaps they were never meant to.
Alia, overcome with grief, performed his burial in the Aurelian manner. King Halrix himself arrived to honour him, his presence a somber mark of respect. After the king departed, Lord Aron approached Alia.
"Lady Alia, with Akon gone, I offer my assistance in the running of the court. You have Aida to raise, and you are deep in sorrow," Aron said, his voice soft, feigning sympathy.
Alia's eyes burned with fury. "Should I call you Lord Aron, or Aron the backstabber? You come to claim Thravenreach, I see. But you forget that I still hold sway among the Naqari chieftains. I shall not let you take even a finger's breadth of this land."
Aron stood still, taken aback, but his lips curled into a mocking smirk. "And what will ye do, Alia, widow of Akon? You think the Naqari will rise against Velmorra?"
"If I am the daughter of my father, and wife of Akon," she hissed, her words venomous, "I swear, I will bleed your army dry, and once I have done so, I shall come for your head myself. From this day forth, sleep with one eye open, lest ye find a Naqari dagger in your throat."
Her words, fierce and unyielding, caused Aron to retreat in silence, knowing well the wrath of the Naqari.
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The elders of Thravenreach, with great consensus, named Alia their regent. Flamewood ceased their advances, and the Naqari were pleased to see one of their own in such power. Even Aron, though frustrated, dared not challenge her openly.
Though not born of Aurelian blood, Alia raised Aida as if she were. She taught her daughter the ways of the world, preparing her for betrayal at every turn. Aida, inheriting her father's intellect and her mother's unshakable resolve, grew into a woman of rare strength and wit.