I thank My LadyCibelle and Techsan for their rapid editing of this story. This is a story I wrote some years ago and I found it again the other day whilst tidying up my hard drive. I thought it would make a perfect epitaph to Otterley who is no longer with us. She liked this story a lot.
To Otterley
When Tony first noticed the car, he had almost stopped to ask for directions. However, the look on the driver's face made him change his mind. She had that "Go Away" look in her eyes. Tony did not blame her really, she was parked out in the middle of nowhere with two small children in the car and she didn't want some strange man stopping.
Tony drove on for maybe another half-hour before deciding that he was on the wrong road. The sun was setting on his left, and not ahead of him as it should do if he was travelling west. Tony had begun to regret taking the suggestion of the waitress back at the truck stop. He had asked her if there was a decent but reasonably priced motel around. She had asked where Tony was heading and when Tony told her she suggested that Tony turn off at the next intersection and go to the town of Huntly. There was a very good Hotel there, but as the town had been bypassed when the Freeway was built, they keep the prices down to try and attract customers. It was about half an hour off the freeway but tomorrow he could carry on out the other end of town and pick up the freeway further along.
The only sign of life Tony had seen was that one car since leaving the freeway nearly an hour ago. Convinced he had taken a wrong turn somewhere, Tony decided that his best bet was to go back to the freeway and try again. The car was still in the same spot as it had been earlier and as Tony approached it, he could see that the woman was still inside by the light from his headlights.
"Like it or not lady!" Tony thought "I'm not leaving a woman and kids sitting out here in the dark on this road," and pulled in front of her. As he walked up to her car, Tony made sure to shine his torch on himself so she could see his hopefully reassuring face. Making sure he didn't get to close to the car, Tony asked if she was having a problem and if he could be of any assistance, hoping his English accent would not alarm her.
In the back of Tony's mind was the story of the English tourist who got lost in Texas. He had managed to get himself shot when he inadvertently went to the back door of a house looking for directions. And Tony had heard, some American women carry guns in their cars!
She still looked a little apprehensive, but explained to him that the car had made horrible noises and just stopped. The engine was running but when she put the car in drive it didn't move.. She told Tony that she lived about four miles down the road, but she couldn't carry the children that far. So they had been sitting there for a couple of hours, hoping a police car or someone she knew would come along. Now the children were getting very hungry and restless.
Tony suggested that he could give her a lift home or, if she preferred, Tony could get a rope out and tow her to her home. That way she wouldn't have to get into a stranger's car. The tow home was gratefully excepted and Tony got a length of rope out, and prepared to attach it to the towing eye on the front of her car. She got out of her car and asked if she could hold the torch for him. As Tony handed it to her, their hands touched and something very strange happened. Tony can only say it was like an electric shock passed between them. She felt it too, and dropped the torch! They both said, "I'm sorry" and reached for the torch at the same time. Their heads collided with a crack and both grabbed at each other to stop themselves falling over. Half a dozen "I'm' sorry's" later they realised we were in each other's arms.
Tony told me that it was a mind blowing experience, holding this woman whom he didn't know just felt so right. For a moment their eyes met. Tony said they were the most beautiful eyes he had ever seen. They broke away from each other once more, saying "I'm Sorry!" and Tony quickly returned to attaching the rope in an embarrassed silence. She gave him instructions to her house and off they went.
As they drove it started to rain. Tony got quite wet because at every junction they came to, he had to jump out and run back to her to check they were going the right way. Eventually they arrived at her house. Talk about in the middle of nowhere. Tony couldn't see the lights of any other houses.
He disconnected the towrope whilst she took the children inside. By now it was pouring down rain and Tony was soaked. When he went to her door to say his goodbyes and ask her for directions to this Huntly Hotel she dragged him inside and saying after his kindness in helping her, there was no way she was going to let him leave until he had dried out and had a decent meal! Tony pointed out that her husband might not like it if he came home and found a strange man in her house. She said he wouldn't be coming home as he was doing thirty days in jail for getting in a barroom brawl.
In the light of the house Tony could see she was about 5' 3" quite slim with long dark hair, she was not what most people would call a raving beauty, but Tony found her very attractive. She told him her name was Holly, and asked what he was doing in the States.
Tony told her that it was a coincidence her name being Holly, as he had come to the States to marry his teen sweetheart who was also called Holly. Tony had met her and they had become sweethearts for three years whilst she lived in England, her farther being stationed there as a diplomat. Then five years ago her parents separated and she returned to Florida with her mother. The plan had been that Tony would come over to join her when she finished college and they would get married.
Things hadn't gone quite to plan, as Tony had a serious road accident about two months after Holly left. He had been in a coma for eight months, and spent nearly two years in hospital. It had taken another three years for him to get fully fit again and get his compensation sorted out.
When Tony came out of the coma there was a great stack of letters from Holly. They corresponded with each other every couple of days, for the five years they were apart. And so six months ago Tony flew to Florida, they fell into each other's arms and Tony reckons they didn't let go of each other for a week. They didn't leave their motel room for three days. But after the first few weeks, things weren't going so good. Holly was feeling a little claustrophobic. Although they had been planning on getting married for the last almost eight years, they had never formally been engaged to each other, and had both been playing the field a little. Holly said, and Tony believed her, that she loved him, but now things were going just a little too fast for her. So he had suggested that he would go off for a couple of months and tour the States. If Holly didn't want to marry him when he came back, they would call it a day and Tony would return to England. She thanked him for being patient with her, but as Tony had waited five years another couple of months was not going to make much difference. So that was why, Tony was travelling alone around the States.
Holly said that it was a romantic story and said that his "Florida Holly" was a silly girl if she didn't hang on to a handsome, chivalrous man like Tony.
Tony had a shower and changed into some dry clothes whilst Holly fed the children and put them to bed. Then Holly made a meal for Tony and herself. Tony found himself sitting down to a candle-lit dinner, when Holly produced a bottle of wine; he said he couldn't drink any, as he had to drive to the hotel tonight. Holly insisted that he wasn't going anywhere! She had a spare room and had already made up the bed whilst Tony had been in the shower. "For all you know I could be an axe murderer!" Tony commented. Holly told him not to be silly. She had been alone in his company for four hours, if he was going to do her any harm he would have done it hours ago and been over the State Line by now. They both laughed and ate their meal. After they had eaten, they sat in the lounge and talked about their lives, their loves and their hopes for the future. Just before they went to their separate beds, Holly said that there was a wonderful lake nearby. "It's a must see!" if you are in this part of the country. Before Tony left tomorrow she would take him there to see it, maybe take a picnic.
As Tony came down stairs in the morning he heard a man's voice in the kitchen and was unsure whether to make his presence known. But Holly called out for him to come into the kitchen. "This is my English Knight In Shining Armour" she announced as Tony walked into the room. Tony saw a large man standing by the door. "Meet Jake, Tony! He's going to take my car away and work his magic in it, he's the best mechanic in the State!" Tony noticed the big man blushing and thought to himself that he wasn't the only man around that was captivated by this enchanting woman. Tony went outside with Jake and helped him hook Holly's car up to his Tow truck. As they worked Jake said "Great girl, ain't she! It's a dam shame she fell in love with the arsehole she's married to! She could have the pick of the guys in town but she married that creep! He knocked her about once you know. When the guys from pool hall found out they kicked the shit out of him. He hasn't laid a finger on her since. Everyone tells her to dump the slob, but she won't! She says she loves him and is gonna stay with him!"
Tony and Holly went to the lake shortly after Jake left. They walked by the Shore carrying a child each. Holly said that Tony was going to make a good father and she was feeling rather jealous of his Holly.
Just after midday Tony said he thought he should take Holly and the girls home because he had better get moving soon. Holly looked at him and asked him to stay with her one more night! They both new they wanted each other. Could they just spend one night together? Then tomorrow he would leave and she would collect her husband from jail. Tony put his arms around Holly and kissed her.