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A Karate Love Story, Ch. 01
"In the Dojo"
I stood motionless in a cat stance, sweat pouring down my face and soaking the back of my
gi
.
"Sink in that cat stance!" shouted Sensei. "Green belts and above have no excuse! You cannot progress without a good cat stance!"
In the mirror, I could see heads bobbing as people of all belt colors tried to "sit down" better in their stances. I was proud that I already had a better cat at blue belt than some of my seniors, but the drawback at times like this was that I'd been doing it correctly for a minute longer than some of them, and my back leg was burning viciously.
I really need to practice this at home more
, I thought.
I surreptitiously put more weight on my front foot for a moment to relieve the discomfort, then quickly shifted back as one of the black belts roaming the room neared me. I felt a little stab of guilt as I remembered one of Sensei's favorite admonitions: "Do the right thing always, not just when I'm watching you!" I sank more deeply than required to make up for my little transgression.
Eat bitter
, I thought desperately.
Eat bitter, eat bitter, eat bitter . . .
"
Yame
!" Sensei called. "Switch legs!"
The entire dojo sighed in relief, then circle-stepped quickly to the other side, everyone striving to make this one perfect. Sensei grabbed his
shinai
and began circulating around the room with the other black belts. The
shinai
, a bamboo sword that made a loud cracking sound on contact, was more a reminder than any kind of real threat. Sensei Tom liked to pretend he was hard on us, that
one day
he might actually take out someone's knee to punish a weak stance, but I couldn't imagine a more gentle-hearted, giving person. Of course, I would
not
want to be the idiot that tried to mug him on a dark street . . .
As usual, Sensei began one of his long, instructive anecdotes as we sweated and fought to maintain perfect stances. "I had a brown belt one time – did NOT want to practice his cat stance," he said as he stepped neatly between two blues further down the second row from me and began to inspect the third line. He tapped a green sharply on the back leg with the
shinai
, and the woman promptly sank. "Well, he had some other issues too. Wanted to learn a lot of flashy stuff, wanted to go to tournament. Wanted to walk around like a big shot looking for a fight so he could prove how big and bad he was. Got mad because I wouldn't promote him fast enough for his ego."
He paused again and spoke quietly to a blue, gently adjusting the man's shoulders to the proper angle. "I held him back because his pride kept him from practicing the fundamentals that are so important to doing
kata
properly, and he did not exhibit the humility and willingness to learn that should be characteristic of the higher ranks."
My back leg started to tremble despite my efforts to remain still, but I refused to let myself give in to the temptation to rest it. After all, I wanted to learn to protect myself, and an attacker wouldn't step back and give me a break to rest my aching muscles.
"
Yame
!" Sensei called again. "Stand in ready position; I won't make you hold that cat all day. Of course, if we were on Okinawa, I could leave you there, go make a cup of tea and a snack, and come back in thirty minutes." We all smiled; he loved to pretend despair over his soft treatment of us. We gratefully stood up straight with our fists held low in front of us in ready position. The white belts up front wiped their foreheads quickly and adjusted their
gis
, while the rest of us stood proudly motionless, still disciplined despite the easier stance.