When she came over, I tried. I really tried.
This story was written for the
750 Word Project 2024
. The story between the line and the asterisk closure has exactly 750 words according to Google Docs and Lit's story editor, while Word inexplicably say its 751. Go figure. The intent is to be short and to the point, leaving a lot to the imagination. Hope you enjoy!
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She was a knockout and I wanted her.
I watched as she approached the bar, loving the way her dress fit her, the way she moved. She was a wet dream waiting to happen, and I was the dreamer. Then she came my way, and my dream grew.
When she sat down, I saw the sadness in her eyes, which were fixed on her hands, studying them intently rather than searching the bar for anyone, either in particular or in general.
The bartender started toward her but I signaled and she nodded just before the woman looked up, her gaze on me.
"Hi, ma'am, I'm Dustin. May I buy you a drink?"
She frowned and there was fire in her reply. "Am I old enough to be a ma'am, too?"
In truth, she appeared to be close to my age, probably early to mid-forties, so I gave a little nod. "My parents taught me that any woman one doesn't know, of whatever age, deserves that respect...at least until she does something to prove otherwise."
"Sorry, rough day. Didn't mean to bite your head off. I'm Jill."