You cannot use this story for any commercial purpose, and you cannot publish it in any website other than Literotica. Respect original writing. Thanks.
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I dedicate this story to Connie the Hot Cunt, and its conclusion, which will happen in the next episode, to Miss X, there in Alabama.
Note: This story was never intended to be a quick teasing :-) so don't think of it as that. Its MAIN purpose is not to tease. I received an angry question: what is sexually exciting about all this? The answer is, the possession of a woman as a sexual object, and the fact that she can be forced to experience pleasure even under conditions of bondage and slavery, as any D/S couple knows.
That said, there is a huge difference between writing or reading a story and acting it up in real life. If you can't tell the difference, then you're in the wrong website.
But anyways my main purpose was not to tease, but to shock, and to make a statement about the inherent evil present in human nature, in an atmosphere of sex.
Also, the same person implies that there hardly is nothing erotic in all this, that I have no idea what erotic writing is about. I disagree.
Actually, the Ashley character is directly inspired in Justine, or the Misadventures of Virtue, by the Marquis de Sade. And for all the connoisseurs of literature know, his purpose was not to tease, but to shock, and to make a statement on the evil nature lurking within the human beings...
... And his literature is considered as erotic, even though many of his scenes are much more shocking and about degradation than what I present here, and even though he's been criticized as lacking in literary flair... still he's recognized today as the master of sadistic writing. I certainly used his narrative techniques.
Someone has to tell you that storytelling and real life are different things.
You called me a sadist. This section of the site contains many stories about Sadism, because they are the core of any real Dominant/Submissive relationship, and the terms Sadism and Sadist come directly from the Marquis de Sade's name. So are all of us wild whackos, as you say, because we indulge in, yes, sadistic writing and reading? Whew it is fortunate that you aren't a court judge :-)
And de Sade's stories are wildly whacked out... and still always to be found in the erotic section of book shops, nevertheless. How does your square mind explain that fact?
So if I am a sadist because I write stories meant for this section, then you are a sadist too because you read them? Is this true? No, it isn't.
But there's a big difference in writing or reading stories, and acting them up in real life. Didn't your Literature teacher tell you this? ( if you ever had a Literature teacher, that is )
... But, you are right in one count: if you are one of those persons so that all you need is a quick jack off without any troubles for your puritan conscience, then yes, by all means you can look elsewhere, there's a vast selection of different types of stories in this site...
( But by the way, if you didn't like it, how come you've read ALL the episodes, as you just confessed? Who forced you to read ALL the episodes -?!?!-)
Moreover, this site is for adults only, so stop crying, please.
Oh boy. All in all, seems I succeeded in causing a strong impression. Thus, I reached my goal with this story...
Final note: Some readers ( like this one ) seem to think that the writer is supposed to please them. Not me. A true writer wants to please himself and make a statement... We are egocentrical, did you know that? So, no I am not concerned with pleasing your desires. Look for your hand for that :-)
Even so, I always listened to POLITE and reasonable requests. So, no, I'm sorry to dissapoint you, but the story will end in episode 10, as I planned it to be from the very start. I don't know why it upsets you so much ( since nobody is forcing you to read), but that is your problem, not mine.
You may not like the story, and that is your privilege as reader, but you of course cannot subdue my freedom of expression at all, you like it or not... That request of you sounds pretty full of bigotry to me. I've got a feeling you'll drop by again, but no, goodbye, you are not welcome in my story :-)
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I would like to say to you that Liutenant Morrow came and took all the crooks to jail, but sadly it wasn't so. He came, yes, but Ashley was locked in the hen's cage, and she had been ordered to not make any noise, just as every other night, and she obeyed. He and his assistant made questions, but no one reported anything suspicious, including Betty. She felt tempted to, but felt afraid of what they might do to her...
Nevertheless, he went to Lake Cheetachooga, and with the help of the local police, had the trailer located and taken out to the ground.