Hey Everyone -- Sorry it's been a while on this story. Here's an update; I hope they won't be as few and far between from now on. First, a recap: Jace, our (dickish) private investigator was hired to find a woman named Zena Abramova, but he's under a hypnotic curse to follow orders at the snap of a finger. There's like 18K words of other backstory in the other chapters, but that should be enough -- combined with the first part of this story -- to get you started, if you're new.
I had to do some plot stuff in the first half of the story, so there's that (although *I* still think it's hot, but maybe I'm biased). Whipping/foot worship/CBT stuff in the second half of the story. Everyone is over 18 years old. And, yeah, it's nothing but fantasy but even still...let's hope it's filthy fucking hot fantasy.
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Next to his ear, someone snapped their fingers, and Jace opened his eyes.
The first thing he noticed was the ceiling above him: open rafters high up, shrouded in darkness. A warehouse by the look of it.
He sat up, put his weight on one elbow, and blinked. He found himself on a makeshift bed of sacks of cattle feed. The mealy scent of hay and hops and flour hung in the air all around him. Away and below him, Jace heard the mournful cry of a train whistle.
A warehouse indeed, then.
"Jace," a voice said next to him, and he turned.
Molly sat next to him on the floor, legs crossed, her log deep-scarlet hair tossed over one shoulder, tumbling to her hip. She'd slipped out of the corset Mistress Silvera had made him pick out for her at Lady O'Leary's; she now wore the jeans of a day laborer and a rough woolen shirt a bit too big for her. One of the sleeves fell to her wrist, where she had her had propped on the splintery wooden floorboards beneath her for support.
"Sorry," she said. "I used The Curse to put you to sleep, but I guess I had to use it to wake you up."
Jace sat up and scowled. His head hurt and he didn't know why. This was not what Jace Falcon, private investigator, did. He was not someone shepherded around the city by a bunch of conniving women for their own ends. He was Jace fucking Falcon, and the richest people in both Acidalia and Galena City would have paid good money for his services and discretion. *Had* paid good money for his services and discretion. He did not wake up kidnapped in strange warehouses at the mercy of chorus girls.
"Listen," he said. "I don't know who the fuck you think you are, but this has gone on long enough -- "
"I know who the fuck I am," Molly snapped at him. "I'm Zena Abramova and I am the only fucking friend you got on the face of this earth right now. But I don't have to be."
Jace blinked, mouth agape.
This could not be possible. Zena Abramova, prodigal daughter of Ludwig Abramova -- the oil baron -- who he'd been hired to find. Hired to bring back to her father.
The woman Eva was also looking for. The woman Eva thought she was going to use *him* to find.
Jace swallowed hard, regrouped mentally. He couldn't believe his luck.
Molly -- Zena -- stood walked away from him a few paces, and sighed. Jace snuck a guilty look at her gorgeous body as she did, tight and firm and toned in those denim jeans. He didn't feel bad about that at all.
They were in a small wooden room now, he could see. Three walls were built of wooden boards, but the fourth was constructed out of bags of feed piled on top of each other. Jace got the sense that whoever owned the warehouse didn't know about this hideout. Molly/Zena clearly felt comfortable here though, Jace saw; she was barefoot, the soles of her feet dusty beneath the hems of her jeans.
"You're Zena Abramova," Jace repeated, and tried to sound incredulous enough to keep the upper hand. "As in, daughter of Ludwig Abramova."
"Oh my fucking *God* yes," she said, and spun, rolled her eyes. "Seems like all anyone can do is mention that evil old man in the same breath as my name, but yeah, I'm Zena Abramova. Ludwig's daughter."
She paused, hands on her hips at the foot of the makeshift bed where Jace remained propped up on his elbows. She fixed him with a dark-eyed stare that could've pinned a butterfly to a notecard.
"And I know Ludwig hired you to find me," Zena said. "I was actually glad to hear that, because it showed he was getting desperate."
A thin smile curved across Jace's lips. "I don't suppose I could convince you to return to your father's mansion with me?"
"Fuck off, asshole," she said, and flipped him a middle finger, shook her head in disgust. "Annette was right about you, you know that?"
Jace swallowed and scowled. He still remembered eating Annette's sweaty ass in front of a bar full of cheering patrons at Lady O'Leary's.
"You should've heard the things she wanted to do to you once she found out about The Curse," Zena said. "Things that would wreck your entire fucking career. Things I talked her out of. That I could still let her do, if you don't wise up real quick and shut the hell up."
Jace rolled his eyes. "You mean worshipping her ass in front of a room full of people wasn't enough?"
Zena gave a dismissive wave. "That was Lady O'Leary's on a Saturday night. No one cares. No one even *mentions* Lady O'Leary's. If you thought that was public humiliation, that was nothing."
Jace swallowed hard and pursed his lips. He knew she was right.
"So how does a nice little girl like you --"
She smacked him harder across the face than he ever could have imagined she would. It made his ears ring; he could practically feel his cheek swelling in real time.
"Fuck," Jace muttered.
"Still a nice little girl?" Zena asked.
She put one foot on his balls, through his pants, and pressed down. Hard.
Jace winced, tried to get away, but she snapped her fingers and everything from the neck down went dead.
Except for the nerve endings, apparently, if the agony in his groin as any indication.
"How does a nice little girl like me wind up dancing in Acidalia's underbelly?" Zena asked. "That's where you were going with that?"
"Sure, we can start there," Jace said, trying to keep the strain out of his voice.
"You've got to be the richest girl -- er...woman -- in Atalantahna at this point.
Definitely in Acidalia. You left that for Lady O'Leary's?"
Zena glanced down at her foot in his groin, sighed, and removed it, much to Jace's great relief. She didn't free him from his paralysis though.
"There's more to life than money, Jace Falcon," she said.
"Easy for the richest woman in Atalantahna to say."