Author Note: When I first started this story, I had no idea what I was going to do with these characters. I only knew that my original story was inferior and I challenged myself to write something better. I wanted to create a more romantic version of my BDSM story. Something more than just a few sex scenes strung together with a thin plot line. I wanted something funny and interesting with colorful characters. However, I did not have anything beyond the first chapter planned. Now over the past three chapters, the characters have grown and taken on a life of their own. I feel like Lori, Eric and their friends are now telling the story for me. The characters will show me where I should go next. I personally like Catrina, which came as a surprise since she started as a minor character. She is the most amusing to play around with because she is funny and bratty. I know so many people like her! There has been some criticism that the main characters are not communicating, as they should be in a good DS relationship. I agree that Lori and Eric's relationship lacks some communication, but I am taking a longer view of the story because I now have an outline for three more chapters. I hope that my readers will stick with the story and enjoy it for what it is, a little romantic, a little funny and a little erotic. Keep in mind that I am not a professional writer. This is something that I do in my spare time for enjoyment. Of course, outside input is always welcome. Thank you for your support!
Wizard666
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Chapter Four: The Larger Community
For Lori, it seemed like a long week. She could not help herself. Catrina's words had stuck in her head. Now she secretly looking at her coworkers wondering about their private lives. She kept picturing who might be the dominants and who might be the submissives. This kept going on with everyone she knew. She was judging inside her own mind what she thought they might get up to in the bedroom. She had no idea if she was right or not, but it became a fun game nonetheless.
Lori had to admit that she was getting nervous about meeting Eric's friends at this party. Was she going to fit in? Would they be able to tell she was new by all the mistakes she would make? She was worried she wouldn't make a good first impression. She wanted Eric to be proud of her. To stroke her hair and call her
good girl
. To fuck her hard until it felt like they were the only two people left in the world while everything else became background noise. Two souls fused together into one.
Oh God! Was she a hopeless romantic?
She would often think in these silent moments of reflection. Yes. She thought. Yes, she was and she was okay with that.
Catrina would texted her several times a day. She was that kind of friend, she always kept up contact even on days when they did not meet up in person. Lori found it comforting. Of course, Catrina wanted to know what happened after they left that day. Lori told her. It was her duty as Catrina's friend to fill her in on the sexy details.
Catrina came over one day when Eric was not there. They did not revisit that kiss they had shared. Lori was somewhat relieved that Catrina acted like nothing had happened. She like the friendship they had developed. Lori didn't want to see that change, at least not yet. Lori had a great deal of change in her life already. So much that she was still adjusting to it. However, Lori could not deny it. Part of her wanted to explore more than just a kiss with Catrina. She hoped one day in the future that they could take that path together, with Eric and Sven's permission, of course.
It seemed to take forever, but finally the weekend came. The party was following weekend. Eric said he wanted to take Lori somewhere special that day. It just so happened that it was a beautiful spring day. They ate lunch at a downtown restaurant on Younge Street. It was one of Eric's favorite places to eat and have a beer. Afterwards they walked up the street. No suit and tie today, Eric was dressed down in clothing that was more appropriate for a leisurely stroll. Saturdays were normally relaxed days. For her part, Lori wore a nice spring dress to compliment Eric's attire.
As usual on a nice day in downtown Toronto, the street was filled with an overwhelming variety of colorful characters. Men, women and children from all over the world lived in and visited the city. Street performers hung out by the mall, while preachers handout pamphlets, panhandling for God. Eric wasn't a believer, neither was Lori. It was another thing they found they had in common. It was the little things that made Lori feel closer to Eric. They added up quickly and there were many little things they had in common. She hugged his arm as they walked up the sidewalk in the warm sunshine.
"You know," Eric said. "About the other day... The inspection. We never really talked about it. I hope I wasn't pushing you too much. I honestly thought you would say
no
."
"I almost did," Lori replied. She squeezed his arm a bit and stiffened. She hadn't really thought about it since. Now she had the memory of that humiliation fresh in her mind.
"Why didn't you?" He questioned.
"I don't know," Lori squirmed a bit. She wasn't interested in having this conversation right now, but he was the dominant. "There was just something, in the back of my mind that wanted it. There was a small part of me that was really turned on by that whole scene."
"Really?"
"Yeah, actually it's kind of scary."
"What? Scary?"
"Yeah, these thoughts are growing and starting to take over," she explained. "I don't know what's going on, but the feelings and desires that I have always kept locked up... It's like you have this
master key
and you're unlocking all the doors. Now my darker desires are coming forward a bit. So yeah, it's kind of scary." That was a little hard for her to say, but she was glad she told him.
"So that whole scene was okay?" Eric asked.
Lori nodded.
"A
master key
, eh?" Eric said. "That's kind of cool."
Lori nuzzled Eric's arm and said. "Can we change the subject? You're giving me butterflies."
"Butterflies?"
"Yeah, in my stomach. Like when there is a strong connection between us. The emotions. It feels like butterflies in my stomach. You never feel that way?"
"Are you talking about nervousness? That I could understand," Eric questioned. "Like a gut check?"
"I guess, kind of," Lori replied. "But it's not like I'm nervous really. It's just really strong feelings like
love
. When the connection is deep between us, I feel it. Then it feels like butterflies in my stomach."
Lori almost told Eric about the kiss with Catrina, but she wasn't sure how he would react to it. Would he be upset or just laugh? She wasn't sure if she really to tell him that yet. She was still processing that moment and those feelings herself.
"No, I don't think I've felt anything quite like that before," Eric said.