This is my first piece on literotica, and I'd love some feedback if anyone reads this! :)
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"I swear to God he's going to break her in half."
I raised my eyebrows. From my left came a man (at least I think he's a man) sporting thick stubble and bright blue eyeshadow which seemed to had taken over his face. I nodded. His short pink apron and skirt combo drove a grin to my face and I struggled to push it back down. Thankfully his eyes were busy as he joined me in leaning against the wall, looking around at the strange spectacle before us.
The basement room was open, dark, and stunk of sweat, plastic, and sex. In one corner, a short red haired woman who must have been in her sixties had set up a makeshift bar on top of a couple of barrels. People everywhere were hitting each other with random objects in various stages of undress. Excruciatingly loud club music from the nineties blared through dusty speakers hung haphazardly in the ceiling.
Directly in front of me and apron guy we had the pleasure of witnessing a fat hairy mongrel of a man violently fucking a tiny girl who couldn't have been older than twenty. He had laid on top of her on what I thought was an upside-down pool table and was having a glorious time of using his three-times-your-size weight to crush her repeatedly against the hard wood. It was too dark to see the girl's face to see whether she was enjoying being pulverized, but I had to assume this was consensual. Everything seemed to be here. Freakish and frightening, but that's how they liked it.
"I'll admit," I said to apron guy. "I'm experiencing a little bit of culture shock."
Apron guy threw back his head in a throaty laugh and thumped my shoulder with a rough hand, fingernails painted pink.
"Well, you are not the first son. What's your name kid?"
"Sam. And yours?"
"Twinkledick."
I tried to determine whether or not this was a joke. I settled for nodding and smiling in a friendly manner as apron guy waved to someone across the room and moved to join them. As he did not correct me, or spring a 'just kidding!' I guessed he was in fact serious.
"Well I hope I meet you again Sammy."