This is a revised edition of my original chapter... Wonderful feedback from a few valued readers made me realize the scene in the restaurant was not consistent with the continuity of the story or Patrick and Corrine's relationship. Concerns of disregard towards her hard limits were valid and very constructive. I hope the new scene pleases you as much as it pleases me!
Thank you to FA_JF and Lindseymarsh for your original edits, along with voicing your own concerns for the original scene. Thank you to Masterfuljim for taking the time to give your stamp of approval for the new scene since it was your comment that initially brought the concerns to light!
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Like most couples, certain patterns begin to emerge. Since our first night together in the cabin, once we've come down from the high of our orgasms and the intensity of our power exchange, we go back to laughing and debating on essentially equal terms. However, on this evening, after he has plugged my ass and trapped his seed inside of me, the energy between us has shifted. As we step into the shower, instead of walking in and immediately reaching for the soap, I just stand there. Passive. He seems to expect this, and quite naturally and casually begins to bathe me with a soap-lathered cloth.
With no words between us, he appears almost clinically detached as he sets about cleaning my body. Beginning with gentle caresses to my face and neck with the washcloth, he moves on to my breasts and torso using firm circular strokes. Individually lifting each wrist high above me, he cleans under my arms before carefully lowering them back to my sides. Lower still; he washes between my legs and ass cheeks, careful not to displace the plug that holds his seed inside of me, before finishing with my legs and feet. While it feels a little odd to surrender this ritual to him, the simple act of bathing myself, it also feels right that he should bathe his toy. For that's what this weekend is about. I'm his to fuck and control, to impart his will and satisfy his needs; but I am also his to take care of, to keep safe and to cherish. In this moment, I feel coveted.
My eyes remain downcast as he bathes me; my mind numb to everything but the water crashing down and the cloth against my skin. It barely registers when his hands gently but firmly move me under the shower's stream, facing me outwards towards him. I feel the soap on my body cascade down to the shower floor.
As if waking from a dream my eyes slowly rise to meet his, briefly pausing on his impossibly hard cock that belies his otherwise calm demeanor. When my eyes reach his, I jerk backwards as if shocked by a jolt of electricity. The intensity of his gaze shoots through me and straight down to my cunt.
Patrick moves on to washing his own body with what seems the same mechanical detachment as he had mine, except for the brief moment his eyes slowly close and his breath slips from his open mouth as he washes his cock and balls. He strokes his thick cock with a soapy hand, rinses, then continues to stroke himself with an unhurried rhythm. Eventually he releases himself to finish cleaning the rest of his body, his eyes returning to their study of me. His unattended cock remains rigid, moving slightly up and down seeking his hand again. His scrotum is tight against his body. His control fascinates me.
Under his scrutiny, I feel raw and exposed as if he can see every thought, experience, and emotion, both dark and light, which make up who I am. It's almost too much and I have to look away. I allow my eyes to break contact with his and lower them to take in his body. Rivulets of water cascade down his slim torso, over his tight chest and core. Beads of water cling to his tattoos, causing them to glisten in the light. The ice-blue eyes of the serpent almost shimmer with malevolent intent. The grey hairs, interspersed with the light brown on his head and chest only add to his raw strength and sexuality.
Patrick's thumb and forefinger firmly grasp my chin and draw me back to his eyes. His tone is stern, but his eyes are shining brightly now.
"What's in your ass Corrine?"
"Your cum, Patrick."
His eyes widen briefly in question.
"Your cum, Sir."
"How does that make you feel?"
Closing my eyes, I think for a moment. "Claimed...marked. Owned."
Brushing my wet hair off of my face, he smiles, then leans down and kisses my forehead gently.
"Good."
Turning off the water, he leads me to the center of his bathroom and dries me with his towel. He steps away, leaving me to stand alone on the soft bathmat as he dries himself. The warm, summer evening keeps me from developing a chill, yet I tremble just a bit anyway.
His sperm still deep in my ass, not a drop lost due to the thick, unrelenting plug. Although I've just showered, I feel so very dirty; so naughty. My tight ring still tingles with the memory of his thick cock stretching it; it's rigid length pulling on the virgin tissue as he stroked in and out of me for the first time.
With his cum trapped inside of me until he wishes otherwise, I revel in the feeling of being a receptacle for him; a vessel. My accomplishments, my profession, my family... In this moment they are safely tucked away. I belong to him, body and soul; reduced down to the purist form of submission I can give him. Yet...I don't feel subjugated. I feel lifted; elevated to a higher plane of acceptance of who I am and what I need. Patrick seems to know my needs even before I am aware of them; tapping into them at a slow but purposeful pace.
I feel my mind drifting; looking inwards. I think back to the days before we met, when my eyes sought him out at the gym. I recall the way my body reacted to his as he pressed himself against mine at the lockers, and then the electricity that shivered through me the first time his hand took mine. I think my body knew, before my conscious mind, that there was a restrained yet potent power inside of him; a strength that could not only match my own, but control and subdue the crashing waves inside of me.
I imagine him as the strong and silent rock, while I'm the current of water that flows around him, guided by his unmovable force. At times, the rock within him creates a barrier, a dam of some sort, which quells my flow until I become a placid, serene lake. At other times, he allows my waters to rage and crash against him; creating a blinding energy between us. I can almost hear the crash of a waterfall around me...
"Corrine."
"CORRINE!"
I feel his warm hands grip my upper arms and give me a slight jostle. "I need you to come back to me now..."
It takes me a moment to focus, and I realize how dazed I must have looked during my reflection. I give him a slight smile and blush. "Sorry....Sir. I just feel so relaxed...I think I drifted pretty deep inside my head."
He pulls me into his arms, my cheeks tickled by the soft hairs on his chest. "From what I could see, you've been dipping in and out of subspace since we got into the shower." He pauses. "It's a beautiful sight to see. Your features are so soft, so pliant. It makes me think there isn't anything you wouldn't do for me." Although it's a statement, there is a hint of question in his tone.
I think before I respond. I pull back and look up at him. His warm eyes caress over my body. My trust for him runs deep. I trust him with my body. I trust him with my heart. I recall a print from my parent's bedroom that said something along the lines of, "you hold in your hand my fragile heart; do not make a fist". I smile as I realize how vulnerable I feel, yet how much faith I have in his strength and adoration for me. My heart feels safe in the cradle of his strong hands.
I rest my head back onto his chest. "Yes Sir. I would do anything for you."
"Why?" he whispers. His tone is questioning; almost...hopeful?
I take a deep breath. "Because I trust you... I care for you... I love you Sir."
I hear his throat briefly catch as his arms pull me even tighter towards his body; his head tucked into my shoulder. Our two naked forms cling to each other quietly. With my head on his chest, I can hear the slow regular rhythm of his heart, which quickens after my declaration.
Patrick steps back, his firm hands holding me at arm's length. "Look at me Corrine."
I look up and see his eyes searching mine, as if he wants to make sure I'm of sound mind and not still drifting in subspace. Although I still feel a little otherworldly, I know I'm thinking clearly and have no misgivings for saying what I have, even if he doesn't reciprocate.
He gives a little nod, as if confirming to himself that my words were not born out of misdirected lust or servitude; that they are truthful and from my heart.
"Say it again... Use my name." His eyes are shining brighter than I've ever seen them before as he holds his breath waiting for me to speak.
"I love you, Patrick."
He slowly lets out his breath, briefly closing his eyes, as if he were savoring the words.
Opening them, he looks down at me with such warmth and sincerity I could burst. "I love you too, Corrine...with all of my heart. I've fallen for you so fucking hard it hurts."
Before I know it, he reaches down and lifts me from just under my ass cheeks, and throws me over his shoulder. I squeal, "What the hell?" as he carries me with long strides into the bedroom; tossing me on the bed before climbing on top of and straddling my hips.