This is my very first erotic story; and my very first completed story! I would greatly appreciate feedback. I hope to continue writing erotic stories, and critiques would be greatly appreciated.
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"Marianne's been a bad girl."
Five words started it off. I found the note tucked away in my underwear drawer next to my hot pink, battery operated vibrator. I thought I had managed to hide the toy rather well; apparently I had been wrong. A bit of a panic came over me. It's nothing to be ashamed of; however I was feeling flustered and embarrassed. I didn't have to wonder who found it; I knew perfectly well that is was my boyfriend Andy. Andy was the only person ever allowed into my bedroom. My bedroom was my sanctuary and everyone knew that, however, I'd let Andy in from time to time whenever we needed a quiet place to be together.
I reread the note several times, each time I found myself getting more aroused by the tone of the note. Andy wasn't usually the type of guy to say such things. I know, it's a completely innocent sentence, but Andy wouldn't even hint at anything sexual. I think it's his shy nature that makes him that way. Though we've been together for five months, he's still uncomfortable with having lights on while we have sex. He doesn't vocalize that he wants sex; in fact, if it wasn't for me tearing at his jeans every so often we'd probably never do anything. That would be a huge disappointment for me. I'm twenty six years old and have never had better sex than when I'm with Andy. His body is my ideal type. He's not a jock, he doesn't have a six pack; in fact, he has somewhat of a beer belly, not too big though. His shaggy hair is fun to twist and pull when he's eating my pussy. His skin is pale and soft, and his chest hair provides warmth that any woman would love. And his cock, I've never been so enthralled by any man's penis before I met Andy. Just thinking about his thick seven and a half inch cock in my mouth makes me wet no matter where I am.
Just thinking about Andy leaving such a note and the images of his cock made me want to run straight to my bed and put my vibrator to good use. I slipped the vibrator out of the sock I had it hiding in and turned it on. The vibrations running down my palm into my arm felt stellar. I went over to my mirror to get a good look at myself. I watched myself in the mirror as I shoved the vibrator deep into my mouth, imaging that it was Andy's thick cock getting the royal treatment. A moan escaped my lips before I could help it. Ahh, but who cares if I'm vocal; I'm alone for the time being. I continued watching myself as I slid the toy around my neck, feeling the vibrations all the way down to my now very wet pussy. I wanted so badly to just shove the thing deep inside of me and pump it in and out furiously, but I thought a little bit of a tease would be a nice start. I moved the vibrator down to my size 38 C breasts, lingering around my dark brown nipples. This last action caused me to moan even louder than the first time and I decided that I could no longer hold out. I needed it inside of me. I laid face down on my bed and stuck my dark tanned, round ass into the air. I slid the vibrator in and pumped it back and forth a few times, each time I could hear the sound of my wet excited pussy taking it in; I pushed it further and further until my hand was touching my clit. I began to breathe harder, feeling the vibrations and wishing badly that it was Andy who was deep inside of me.
Just then the doorbell rang. I let out a frustrated groan and placed my vibrator under my pillow so I could get back to what I was doing before I was so rudely interrupted. I grabbed my pink satin bath robe from behind my dresser and headed to the door.
"Just a minute" I yelled to the person on the other side of the door; however, the doorbell kept ringing. "Just a min-"I started. However, I fell silent when I saw who was standing at my door. "Andy, What are you...I got your note." I said, letting a mischievous smile creep along my face. Andy, who at 6'3 was quite taller than me ( I stood at small 5'6"), bent down and gave me a hard kiss on the lips, then, moved his mouth to my neck and ears, all the while he kept a firm grasp on my hair. At first it hurt a little, but the more he tugged at it the more I realized I liked it.
In one swift motion Andy pushed me down on my knees, seizing a good amount of my wavy raven hair in his hands along the way. With one hand still firmly grasping the back of my head, the other quickly unbuttoned and unzipped his pants, which when finally down, revealed his already erect cock. In one swift, deep movement I took him completely in; my face shoved into his dark, untamed pubic hairs. I gagged somewhat, but I loved it. I loved the feeling and the sound that it produced and I know that Andy liked it because as soon as he heard it he pushed harder on the back of my head and his thrusts became more frequent and strained; he was trying to get me gag. I slowly pulled away from his cock, letting my tongue linger around the tip, trying to refrain myself from sucking the life out of the thing.