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"Hey, Lucy, wait for just a sec and I'll walk you out."
I'm at Gordo's Sports Bar, and I just finished my waitressing shift. After six hours of carrying drinks and getting below average tips, I really just want to go home, but I'm supposed to wait for Jeff to walk me out since it's after midnight. After five minutes, though, I finally just forget about Jeff and head out the backdoor.
That was my first mistake. My second is getting in my car and not driving away. I fumble on my phone for a minute, answering messages and checking my email. After, I set my phone in the cupholder, and as I reach for my seatbelt, my car door gets flung open and a hand reaches for my mouth. I pull away, but before I know it my mouth is sealed with tape and my thrashing body is being hauled into the backseat of a dark SUV. The door slams behind me, and out the window I see the man that took me. He's tall, and built. I'm pretty tall, five foot seven, but I could tell he towered over that. It's too dark to see his face, all I can see is the outline of his baseball hat. I reach for the handle, but it doesn't open. The seats have been removed, and a metal fence separates the front two seats from the rest of the car.
Finally I let loose a big scream, still desperately yanking at the door handle. I scoot to the other side of the vehicle and pull on that door, still shouting for help. It doesn't open, either. The front door does though, and through the separation I see my massive captor get in the driver's seat. He slam's the door shoot as I continue to yell. I slam my hands against the window as the car begins to drive away.
The man doesn't seem at all worried about my screaming, or that Im now trying to kick the windows out. After about thirty minutes of driving, I can see were out in the country side. Theres no lights, cars, houses in sight. I stop yelling, beginning to cry instead. I lean against the metal fencing. "Please," I beg, "I won't tell anyone. Just let me out. Please..."
The man glances in the rearview mirror. "Too late now, baby. You're mine. Screaming isn't going to help, and the windows or bullet proof. I suggest you sit down and shut your mouth. Sleep, even. We won't be there for a few hours."
"Please let me out, I can give you money-" the man cuts me off.
"Talk again and I'll come tape your mouth shut and zip tie your arms and legs. And we've got a long drive, so I promise you won't like that."
I silently sob in the back seat. After what feels like hours of crying, I manage to fall asleep.
When I wake up, I'm being lifted from the car, I instinctively start kicking and hitting the giant man. In the light of what looks like a garage, I see his dark brown hair and his matching eyes. He's tan and has stables of facial hair. One big arm wraps around my legs and the other flings me over his shoulder. I fight a little longer, but eventually my captor's hand reaches up and smacks my back. Hard.
"You know there's no point in fighting me, just stop. You'll only make this more painful for yourself."
I continued trying to wrestle my way out of his arms as he carried me up a flight of stairs. Two rough smacks to my butt, and I finally submit and lay over his shoulder, tears leaking from my eyes and onto his white shirt.
"See, that wasn't so bad once you listened to me." He sets me on the floor on my back, turning around to close the door. He locks us both in with a key. I sit up, too afraid to stand, my legs shaking.
"Please-" I am interrupted again.
"Don't talk. I'm going to explain what is happening, and after you may ask questions. If you talk before I'm done, I'm going to punish you for misbehaving. Nod if you understand." In response to my nodding, he continues. "You belong to me now. You're going to do whatever I say and you're going to stay here as long as I want you. You're not going to escape and you're not going to leave. You know you can't fight me. You're going to follow my rules, and disobeying will have consequences.
"You will call me master, or sir, at all times. You won't complain or argue or disrespect me in any way. Obedience will be rewarded, and disobedience will be punished. Any questions?"
I don't even know where to start. Is this real? I figure I should remain calm, maybe try to win his sympathy. Maybe try guilt tripping him just a little. "Well, ummm... What's your name?"
"To you, its Master or Sir. The rest doesn't matter, Lucy. Do you understood?"
He knows my name. "How do you know me, why did you do this-"
"I asked you a question, I expect an answer." He steps closer to me, his figure creating a shadow over me. I feel so small, like a child again. "Do you understand?"
"Yes."
"Yes, sir, you mean." You look expectantly at me. I say nothing. You bend down and begin dragging me towards the king sized bed in the corner. "Thats obvious disrespect. I guess I will need to punish you."
"I'm sorry, please don't hurt me." I start pulling away, but he lays me flat against the bed, face down. I feel a hand reach in between my legs and unbutton the tiny shorts I'd worn to work. They were aggressively yanked off of me, soon followed by my underwear. I try to cover myself, but my hands are pinned to my back.
"Since this is your first punishment, I will go easy on you. Just know that if this behavior continues, the consequences will be more strictly enforced. I'm going to spank you. If you fight, your spanking will go on longer and, trust me, it will be worse for you."
With that a firm hand comes down across my ass, stinging. I cry out, feeling humiliated. I try to crawl away, and the next one comes down across my bottom more swiftly. As he goes to work on my bottom, I continue trying to wrestle away, but his left arm is holding down my back, and I just can't slip away. Finally, with wet eyes and a broken spirit, I be still and wait for it to be over. Soon after I stop struggling, he stands up. I don't move from my position.
"Do you understand me now?" I twist my head to look back at him. He looks even more threatening, now that his assault is over.
"Yes," I whisper weakly. His eyebrows raise. "Sir," I quickly add.
"Less hesitation would be nice, but I guess thats a start." He lifts me off the bed and stands me up, facing him. "Take off the rest of your clothes. Now." I begin to step away. He frowns, shaking his head. "I guess I was to gentle with you. I have a riding crop, maybe that will make the message sink in." He starts to walk to the dresser.