First-time author; comments highly appreciated.
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A sweet Asian girl gradually takes control over a man's life proving she's more than meets the eye.
Lizi was an Asian girl of average build. She was about 5'2", her breast size was a large "B" cup, but she did have a pretty big butt that majority of Asian girls don't have. She was not very talkative but had a wonderful voice and smile.
Mike was a tall, thin-framed guy. He was a successful guy working in a professional field. He was polite and always treating people nice. He was always into Asian girls, the reason is.they are short, cute, nice and sweet.
When Mike saw Lizi's photo, he immediately agreed to meet her. Lizi had the sweetest smile and lovely voice. They agreed to go see a movie together for their first date. Lizi showed up in a miniskirt and a button up shirt. They had a wonderful time at the movie. Mike was totally addicted to Lizi; her polite attitude made Mike believes she was the one that he wanted for the rest of his life.
When Mike drove Lizi back to her place, she invited him inside for a cup of tea as a thank you for the wonderful date. Mike, of course, said yes! He couldn't wait to know this girl more.
As Mike pictured, Lizi lived in a studio that was clean with warm orange lighting. She was really into movies and anime, shown by the several framed movie posters hanging on her wall. He sat down on a small sofa while Lizi prepared some oolong tea. She told him some good tea can always makes her calm. She finally joined Mike sitting on the sofa. Mike couldn't wait to know more about her.
As they were chatting, Mike noticed a box on the shelf with a weird giant handwritten red "X" on its side. He wanted to know what was inside but he didn't want to offend her. Lizi noticed that Mike kept glimpsing at the box, she then asked, "What's wrong with that box?"
Mike felt shame that Lizi noticed he had kept glimpsing at the box, so he said, "Nothing wrong. Just the color and design of the box don't match anything in your apartment. I'm just curious why you keep it?"
Lizi smiled and asked, "Do you want to know what's inside?"