Her Submission
Bdsm Story

Her Submission

by Delicatetwine 13 min read 4.2 (11,300 views)
bdsm edging submissive masterslave punishment shower
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Edging

She kneels at the foot of his bed in her edging position. She's naked under the blanket draped loosely around her. She places her left arm on the edge of the bed, her right hand is beside her, holding her vibrator. Slightly leaning forward, her breasts are free. Her feet are touching behind her with her bare ass slightly resting on them but her knees are wide.

"Begin girl" he says in a tone that is as commanding as it is gruff.

She moves the vibe to settle it between her legs and pushes the power button. The cold silicone jumps to life against her hot and swollen pussy.

She isn't allowed to cum. She isn't even allowed to ask. She is completely his, especially at this moment. Completely at his mercy.

She begins to moan softly, moving her hips, feeling the waves of vibration.

She knows how this goes. This is their nightly routine. After a series of edgings, he may or may not allow her to cum. If he doesn't, he usually uses her wet cunt for his own pleasures. One thing she's thankful for though is that, unless she's being punished, he typically will not leave her without one orgasm.

Tonight was typical, no punishment was in order. She moans softly, and rocks faster against the flowing pattern. Her moans grow louder as her orgasm starts to build.

He had been laying in his bed. Not really paying her much attention at first. This wasn't unusual, sometimes he'd ignore her for his own fun. However, as she neared her climax, he sat up slowly, gazing over on But at her.

"Stop," he commanded.

She lets out a small whine, but obeying his command, she pulls the toy away from her body.

"Count," he said sternly.

Asking her to count was his way of understanding when the pleasure she had built wore off and she was ready to start again.

She counted to 5.

As she did, he got to his feet and rounded the bed to where she was and he stood behind her. Quickly he placed his right hand on her right shoulder and gave it a gentle squeeze.

"Begin girl"

They both felt her jolt a little as the toy made pulsing contact with her throbbing clit again.

After a few minutes he said, "Up girl, present".

She stumbled a little but quickly tried to obey him. The blanket fell to the floor at their feet. She moved into her presentation position on the bed. Her left arm stretched out in front of her, her right hand was still holding the vibe between her thighs. She is propped up on her knees, her ass in the air, her face in the mattress.

"Mmm very good my slave, very good" he said as he inspected her body. "Are you allowed to cum yet, my girl?" He asks, knowing she's nearing her edge again.

"No Sir." she answered quietly, her voice shaky.

"Good girl. You'll remember that then...." His voice trails off, but as it does, he quickly slides a finger in her throbbing and wet pussy.

She moans loudly as the pleasure grows in her.

He slides another finder inside her and she begins to rock against his hand.

"Be still, girl." He says as he inserts a third finger, making her tighten around him slightly. She lets out a fierce moan.

"Do not cum slave. If you cum without my command, you'll receive a strict punishment, do you understand me?" He barks

She shutters. While trying to control her climax, she is overtaken by her focus.

It wasn't until a sharp smack landed on the left side of her ass that she snapped out of her trance.

"I said, do you understand me, slave?" He nearly shouts as he lands another hard smack across her ass.

"Yes, ugh, but, please...."

Just as her words trail off, her climax overtakes her body. She shutters over and over as cum pours out of her on to his hand. But as she does, she knows she's in big trouble with her Master, who, by this time, had swiftly removed his fingers from her pussy. He stands there behind her with his arms crossed and disappointment plastered across his face. As she finishes she falls to the bed exhausted, ashamed and slightly terrified.

"Ok, so you think you're just going to cum without my permission and that'll be all?" He asks, surprisingly calm.

She whimpers.

"Not happening" he says as he smoothly flips her onto her back. He positions her. He spreads her feet wide, leaning into her knees with his elbows. He then places her hands above her head before saying "Do. Not. Move" as he walks into the adjacent bathroom.

While she lays there waiting, small tears form at the corners of her eyes. She's usually much more aware, much more capable of controlling and withholding her orgasms. She knows her Master and his punishments. They aren't typically something to be asked for.

Punishment

A minute or so later, he emerges from the bathroom naked and erect. She has always admired his body. He is slim built, average height and has neat dark brown hair. His skin is soft and warm. His eyes are always passionate but today they were also filled with fire. She knows she has truly fucked up.

He steps closer to the bed. That's when she sees the thick, leather riding crop in his hand and the strap around his wrist. She is in for something, and definitely not a treat.

This particular crop is red with black accents. It's leather and slightly heavy. He hasn't had to use it on her very often but she knows this crop. This is the crop used by Master specifically for punishings after escaped orgasms.

"Do. Not. Move" he says as he again moves closer to the bed "You, my girl, have shown disobedience. You have orgasmed without my permission and you have disappointed me".

She remains still and silent as he positions himself at the top of her head, with his knees on top of her hands and encircling her head. His rigid cock is directly over her face.

"Now," he begins, "I am going to give you your punishment. You are my Submissive, my slave. I own you and your body. I control your orgasms. Do you understand?

"Yes Sir" she answers meekly.

He swings the crop down sharply on her pussy.

Her tears finally fall from her eyes as the pain sets in.

Then he swings the crop again and struck her on her right inner thigh. She squirms. He lands the crop over and over rapidly, hitting her pussy and her inner thighs.

This goes on for several minutes.

He then gets off the bed and walks around to inspect his work. Her pussy lips are red and swollen and even slightly purple. Her inner thighs are purple and blue. She is sore and whimpering.

He climbs up and places his cock on her lips.

"You're going to ready my cock, slave. Take me in your mouth and do not let me fall out. No hands. Keep still. Do you understand?"

"Yes Sir" she responds. She opens her mouth and he forces his cock between her lips.

He chokes her with his cock, thrusting in and out until he is slick and throbbing.

Finally, he lets out a moan of his own and pulls his cock from her mouth. He slides down and places the head of his cock at the opening to her swollen pussy and pushes against it slowly.

"I've taken your mouth, Whore. Now I will use this swollen and bruised pussy because it is mine to use. The pleasure is mine and you will not cum. You will not moan, you will not move, you will not look at me. You will lay here and I will enjoy what is mine. Do you understand that?"

She nods as she looks away from him, tears burning the corners of her eyes again. And with that, he slammed into her cunt, hard. He continued to fuck her pussy as she laid there as still as possible. She could feel him growing closer to his own climax, she squeezed around him gently, coaxing him but being careful not to make it seem like she was going to cum again.

All of a sudden, he stopped.

"Turn over. Hands and knees... now." He commanded. She obeyed him, assuming the position he had demanded.

"Now, I'm going to use your last hole Slave. I'm going to fuck your ass" he said as he smacked her hard. "I'm going to use you like a filthy slut and you're not going to enjoy it, but I am." He said as he placed his cock at her opening and his hands around her hips. "I'm not going to be gentle. You owe me this pleasure, don't you? You took an orgasm that wasn't yours to take, didn't you?"

She nodded.

"Answer me whore. Did you take what was mine?" He growled as he pushed against her small space harder.

"Yes Sir." She said quietly

"Exactly" he snarled. "Exactly"

He then slammed his cock into her asshole and took her ass. He pounded into her repeatedly making her gasp and squirm. And when he was ready, he let go and came hard inside of her. His shudder shook her.

When the tremors had worn off and he stilled, he said "Do not waste my cum, slut. Do not lose any of it. Do you understand me?"

"Yes Sir" she answered.

With that, he pulled out of her and smacked her hard across her bare ass with his hand.

"Now, get my shower ready. You've made me feel dirty." He commanded.

She slowly gathered herself and got up to start the shower.

Showering

She makes her way to his shower. She sets out his towel the way he likes it and brings the water to his temperature, hot. Then, she steps inside the large shower and kneels in the corner, out of the stream of water, facing the walls. Tears begin to fall again as she sinks into her headspace.

She's lost in her mind when he steps into the shower behind her.

"Ah. Good Girl." He mutters, as if she isn't there. "You're going to wash me now, Girl. And please, obey the rules of Master's shower."

She nods slightly. Her shower rules are simple and she actually enjoys them.

You must stay on your knees or be sitting

You may move around by crawling only

You will not speak unless spoken to

You will keep your eyes on the floor unless necessary

You will always wash Master first unless stated otherwise

When washing Master, you will start at his feet then move upwards. You must then ask for permission to stand in order to wash Master's top half

He tosses her a soapy washcloth.

"Begin." he commands.

She gets low to the floor, wrapping her left hand and arm around his right leg. With the washcloth in her right hand she starts at his feet, taking her time to thoroughly scrub him because this is one of her favorite tasks. She snuggles her head against his leg and she can feel him relax into her too.

She feels awful for disobeying him. She loves serving him so much. This is the time when she feels their bond the most.

She moves up and down both legs while snuggling into him, washing him well as he melts into her a little, sinking his hands deep into her hair.

When she's finished with what she can reach she stills, kneeling in front of him and looking at the floor.

Seeing her there, waiting for permission, he says "Yes?"

"Master, may I stand please?" She asks, just above the sound of the rushing water.

"You may not, girl. I have things to say to you."

He backs away from her, letting the water fall over her. He begins washing his hair as he admires how she looks there, naked and wet. He hates punishing her. He hates when he is forced to teach her a hard lesson. He would rather use her in fun ways, when they both get something out of it. He knows how much she loves serving him.

When he's finished rinsing the soap away he moves closer to her. Sinking his hands into her hair again, he tugs slightly and forces her to look up at him.

"Look at me." He says softly. She looks up at him, giving him her eyes and attention. "You're so beautiful, my girl. I hate when I have to punish you. It hurts me. I'm proud of you for taking your punishment with grace but I would enjoy our time together more if I didn't have to punish you at all. Do you understand that?"

The water on them hides her tears and she simply gives him a small nod and says "Yes Sir, it hurts me too."

"I know baby, I know it does. But I wouldn't be a very good Master if I let you get away with breaking the rules now, would I?"

"No Sir."

He relaxes his hands in her hair, letting her head drop down again - the sight of her just giving herself to him is thrilling, intoxicating. He can feel his arousal building again.

He places his hand under her chin and lifts her head to find her eyes again. Hunger burns there, desire, need, fire, lust... love? He shakes off the last one as he grips his shaft in his other hand. He's almost fully hard again. His eyes are blazing back at her when he says "How about you put that beautiful mouth to work for me, hmmm girl? You want to show me how good you can be with your mouth?"

"Yes, Please" she breathes.

He gently presses the head of his cock to her delicate lips. "Good girl." He moves to the end of the shower and puts his back against the wall. She waits where she is until he gently says "come here Girl."

She crawls to him slowly and "sits pretty" at his feet, waiting for his permission. "I want you to look at me while you suck me, I want you to show me what you can do with your mouth."

She slides up his legs as she locks her eyes with his and sweetly takes his cock in her mouth. She loves making him feel good. She loves pleasuring him. She loves his cock in her mouth.

As She begins exploring his cock with her tongue, she slowly moves her hands around his legs, gripping them gently and caressing her way up. She wraps one hand around his shaft and sucks hard on his head. Slowly, she takes him deeper, savoring the moment, feeling him fill her mouth - this time with comfort. A peacefulness settles between them as she picks up rhythm and she feels his body relax beneath her touches.

She can feel how close he is so she takes him all the way in her mouth and feels him at the back of her throat. He jerks a little and she holds him there, swallowing him gracefully and erotically, her lips wrapped tight around the base. Gently, he pulls out of her mouth and says "be... still..." and he lets his cum flow over her beautiful face, claiming her, marking her in yet one more way.

They stay like this for a minute, her enjoying the pleasure in his eyes and him drinking in the sight of her. When he eventually breaks eye contact it almost hurts. He doesn't want to let her go yet. He doesn't want to break the chemistry of this second.

"Good girl" he says, and he steps out of the shower. "Finish up and we'll fall asleep together."

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