This story is not entirely a work of fiction, though it is the first I have written so I would love constructive criticism is always appreciated.
First Time
They had been speaking for weeks now. He knew a lot about her and her about him. They had even met a few times before this night. She had been interested in BDSM before, so many different things she had wanted to try but was always unable to do so. Her daughter was away for the night. So it would be perfect. She had even told him that with others that she had to tell them what she wanted. He assured her that he would be in control. She would only have to obey a few rules of his and he would see to it that this night, her first time, would be a night to remember.
It was seven thirty that night, a cold night. The wind was howling as it blew through the air. The sounds it made reminded him of the sounds of ghosts. A single light on at the apartment he was going to. Making his way up the steps to the top floor. The sound of his heavy leather boots as they hit the cement of each step. Once to the door he looked at the key in his hand. He was given it in advance to let himself in. He adjusted the large sack he carried over his shoulder before using the key to unlock the door and let himself in. a few candles lit the room keeping it Dim but still lit enough to see. And then there was his prize. A beautiful woman kneeling on the carpet for him. Her legs spread so he could see all of her. Her body void of all clothing. Her head down not daring to make eye contact unless given permission. Her hands resting palm up on her legs.
He set his sack down on the ground with a thud. Stepping up to her with a smile on his face. His hand reaching out to run through her long dark hair. She didn't tie it back but he didn't mind. He liked her hair as long as it was. He felt her head lift to his touch and then she reached her hands up to his pants. Her fingers working his zipper down before fishing his cock out. She loved his cock, everything about it would make her tremble with excitement. Leaning in she began to kiss and lick upon his shaft. She wanted to show him how much she missed him and knew she could not speak just yet. His cock throbbing at her attention and he reluctantly pulled away. Nodding his head as he smiled to her.
"Such a good girl."
Her face turning red at his words. "Thank you Sir."
