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Her crying woke me. For a moment I lay still and listened to her gasping sobs. Partly she was crying because of the pain. I had tied her elbows and wrists together behind her back before putting her in the cage, and then attached her bound hands to the top of the cage. She was kneeling, the top of her body horizontal and supported only by the rope tieing her hands to the metal. As her muscles failed her arms would be slowly pulled out of their sockets. Excruciating.
But that wasn't the only reason why she was crying. She still had my cum on her face, just as she had at the club. She had asked for it, begged for it, and if she could have thought of anything more degrading she would have begged for that too. Tonight she had gone from being a kinky girl to being a slave, and she knew it. She knows what the next years of her life are going to be like, because I have told her in great detail. She can see the pain and the complete loss of control. She knows that I will twist all of her old relationships with family, friends, and ex-boyfriends, using them to humiliate her further, to destroy her ability to go back to her old life.
So it was understandable that she would be crying. Understandable, but annoying. Her cage was at the side of my bed, under my nightstand. I pounded the cage with the flat of my hand, making the whole structure boom.
"Quiet!" I commanded. A few snuffles and then silence. I settled back and waited. According to my alarm clock it took seven minutes for her to start crying again. I rolled out of bed.
The carpet beneath my feet was warm and yielding. The air conditioned air was crisp against my skin and my whole body felt fuzzy, as if I was moving in all directions at once. I love punishing my slaves.
Unhooking her hands was the work of an instant, dragging her out of the cage by the hair another. Stumbling and crying she tried to keep up with me as I walked her across the bedroom and into the bathroom. When the light came on I could see that she was trying to stiffle her sobs, but couldn't quite succeed.