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She arrived as he had instructed; naked save for her overcoat and a pair of high heels, an active vibrator tucked between her legs. The drive had been torturous with the toy teasing her to distraction and she hadn't dared to use the parkway, sticking instead to the quieter side-streets. It had been the safer choice, but it meant that she was ten minutes late sending him her text message announcing her arrival.
She waited in the car for him to appear, the noise of the vibrator seeming louder now with the engine off. She glanced around the quiet street. It was late and no one was walking around. She prayed it would stay that way.
Finally he emerged from his apartment building and headed for her car. She unlocked the door and waited. The driver's side door opened and he loomed over her.
"You're late." His voice was cold and demanding. A shiver ran through her at the accusation in his tone.
"I'm sorry, sir. I-"
"Shut your whore mouth. I don't want to hear you right now."
She sat in obedient silence as he stared down at her. He reached down and flicked open the skirt of her coat, exposing her thighs and pussy to the cool night air. The vibrator protruded obscenely from between her thighs, the buzzing louder than ever without the coat muffling it, and he snatched it from her and shut it off. The toy was soaked in her juices, as were the tops of her thighs and the seat of her coat, and for a moment the car was filled with the musky scent of her arousal. He examined the glistening toy in the light of the streetlamps and then reached down and wiped it across her face, smearing her in her own juices. When it was suitably dry, he casually tucked the vibrator into his pocket and stepped back.
"Get up, whore."
She scrambled to obey, her legs trembling as she got to her feet. She was painfully aroused, both from her frustrating ride and from his signature brand of off-handed cruelty. Nothing could make her feel more filthy and debased as the casual tone with which he degraded her. His was the calm voice of reason, and if that voice told her that she was a filthy, shameless whore, then she felt it must be true.
She stood and faced him, though she dared not meet his cold, unfeeling stare. He reached up and opened the top button of her coat so that it fell open as far as her sternum. Anyone seeing her now would instantly guess that she wore nothing beneath the coat, and with her face smeared with her own arousal she felt unbearably exposed, even on the dark, empty street. Her face burned with shame even as her pussy throbbed with renewed arousal.
"Get inside. Now." His voice was still so calm and reasonable, even as her head spun with the overwhelming humiliation of her situation. Still she turned and obeyed, walking on wobbly legs towards his building. She could feel the slickness between her legs as her thighs rubbed together and wondered at the strange power he had over her. He hadn't even laid a finger on her yet and she was already reduced to a bundle of raw nerves, half-mad with desperate lust.
She arrived at the front door and waited for him to unlock it, then crossed the lobby to the elevator, still in the menacing silence of his disapproval. Once inside the elevator he unbuttoned the remaining buttons on her coat, exposing her naked front, nipples hard as rocks, thighs soaked with her slickness, while she stood, silent, arms limp at her sides, eyes lowered in shame and deference. He didn't need to tell her that she would be walking the long corridor to his door like this, fully exposed, protected from the prying eyes of his neighbors only by her own fervent prayers that none would emerge during those moments.
The elevator ride gave her plenty of time to ponder what lay ahead. How angry was he? How bad would he make it for her? She knew there would be pain, there was always pain, but she had never given him such a good excuse to unleash his sadism. Terrified tears were already streaming down her face by the time the elevator opened and she took her long, shameful walk to his apartment. They reached it without interruption and she breathed a sigh of relief as he opened the door and indicated for her to enter ahead of him.
The instant the door was shut behind her, he spoke again.
"Drop the coat. Now." She instantly obeyed, revealing her naked, trembling body to his cold stare. "Legs spread. Hands behind your head. Do it now."
She assumed the position, arching her back in the way she knew he liked, thrusting her tits out, offering them up to him. She struggled to hold the position, to neither cringe nor shake as he walked a slow circuit around her and finally stood still in front of her.
"Ten minutes. Ten minutes you kept me waiting, slut. Is this acceptable behavior, slut?"
"No, sir." She replied in a quavering voice.
"I should send you away. What good is a filthy little whore who can't even follow orders? I should throw you out on the street just as you are, so everyone can see what a worthless little slut you are."
"No, sir, please don't! Please!" she sobbed. She knew he was right. She was a worthless whore who didn't deserve his time.
"You want to be my good little whore again?"