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Carnal Pt 09

Carnal Pt 09

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Thistle couldn't help but toy with her earrings. She had them in for weeks now but they still caught her eye, begging to be played with. The glint of the gold catching in every light. It would be months before she could change them but when she could she had plans.

"Thistle hurry up." Melody called busting into her room. There was no privacy between the two these days. She looked over at Thistle, catching her red handed. "Are you playing with them again?"

"I can't help it." She protested.

"Yes, you can. And if you want something shiny to play with then play with this." Melody walked over and flicked the new tag on Thistles collar. Silver etched with the leopards name in deep purple.

It had been two weeks since Melody had become her mistress. It had gone much smoother than she had expected. Melody and Archer's great communication worked wonders at keeping all parties happy. She would split time between them as a sub and still get her girlfriend time with Archer. Add in a few hangouts with Melody and it was perfect. The only thing missing was sessions with the both of them.

She was hoping that would change tonight. It was her first special event at the club. She would be serving publicly as both of their submissives. Busy schedules finally aligning. Hopefully that would lead to some fun. With that in mind she had foolishly invited Melody over to help with her outfit.

She hadn't been planning on the leopard using her new power to take full control of her outfit. A fishnet body suit covered her from head to toe. Only pasties and a leather skirt for any sort of coverage. The leopard had even threatened to revoke her coat when she had complained about the outfit. It had shut her up.

"Come on, you look perfect sweetie. We got to get going." Melody said taking any agency away from Thistle. She turned, expecting to be followed.

"Yeah, yeah." Thistle muttered, turning off the light as she left.

There was no line outside Carnal tonight. And better yet still no more sightings of the creepy guy that had watched her. They strolled up to the door to a rather dapper-looking Milo. He was wearing a tuxedo that made his auburn fur pop.

"Milo. Looking good but I thought you were done with night shifts?" Thistle asked.

"Thanks ma'am." He replied looking adorably bashful. "I will be, just finding the right job."

"He knows he will be missed so he's stalling." Melody added, wrapping her arms around the wolf. He looked painfully awkward as he had no idea where to put his arms. Especially since Melody was wearing a short backless dress.

"Umm ma'am I need to take Ms. Thistle's coat."

"Fine. So professional Milo." She teased. She shot Thistle a wink as she spoke. Poor kid didn't deserve to be terrorized by her.

He took her coat and the pair darted inside before Thistle froze to death. The cold never seemed to bother Melody. "You ready for your first event?" Melody asked as they headed down the stairs.

"I'm nervous but excited, Mistress." Thistle answered slipping into her submissive role.

"Don't be nervous. It's basically an exhibitionist show. Old hands will be doing demonstrations than anyone else can have a turn to show off. It's kinky art with fancy snacks."

"Yes, Mistress." She replied as they reached the ground floor. Carnal had changed a lot for the event. Archer had decided it was the perfect excuse for a remodel. The bold bar was replaced with a smaller, sleek one. It left room for a future area for full-time guides to help the newbies of the club. The floor was opened up with three large block stages replacing the single circular one, each with an act going. And this was just the start. He had a vision he was willing to close the club to complete.

"Right, sweetheart. I'm going to go check on staff. Go find your Master and let him know you're here."

"Yes, Mistress."

"Oh, and make sure you're respectful to any doms. You're not going to embarrass us, got it?"

"I promise I won't, Mistress."

"I know." Melody lifted her chin, placing a gentle kiss on her lips before heading off. She had been kissing Thistle a lot lately. Not that she minded. It just made her wonder if there was something more. If the leopard was scheming up something big.

Thistle refocused and started to explore the floor. The dress code was so mixed. The doms were all in suits and gowns but the subs all seemed to be in various forms of nudity. On the stage was a man in only black leather pants using wax to make art on a white cat. He had quite the audience who seemed to revel each time the cat squirmed as wax was dropped on her.

She scooted past the group, still not seeing Archer. She was about to reach the second stage when a hand tapped her on the shoulder. She turned to bet met with a dignified looking lioness in an emerald gown. A dominant if she ever saw one.

"I was wondering when you would reappear." She said in a voice with an accent Thistle couldn't place. She also had no idea who this women was. She looked her over but there was no pack symbol meaning she was a complete stranger.

"I'm sorry ma'am, have we met?" She replied, trying her best to sound polite.

The lioness smiled, perfect teeth on display. "We have. Though you were in a ragged state and blindfolded. Perhaps you remember my doll or her taste at the very least?"

A tiny otter girl stepped forward bowing her head. It was weird having a submissive bow to her. She was wearing a maid outfit that was so scanty it could barely be described as clothes.

"Taste of her?" Melody thought before it clicked.

"Of course, I remember now ma'am. I apologize for not remembering you."

"I never thought you would. I've been asking about you since then. It seems we were never here at the same time. Tell me, who claimed ownership of you?"

"Master Archer and Mistress Melody ma'am." She replied curious about where this was leading.

"Archer taking a submissive and sharing? The man has changed. Anyhow, where is your master now?"

"I'm not sure, ma'am. I was searching for him myself."

"Then let us hunt together. Come along you two."

The lioness was off with the otter in tow, neither waiting for her. Thistle had no choice but to follow. It didn't take long to find Archer, talking to a German Shepard that was too bulky for his tux.

She could see Archer cock an eyebrow as she arrived in tow of another dominant. He dismissed himself from the Sheppard and met them halfway. Thistle moved, wanting some semblance of control.

She reached Archer's side and knelt, the floor cold on her legs. "Master may I be of use to you?"

"Always, pet." He answered sounding quiet cheerful. "But first I must see to your company. Magnolia, it's always a pleasure. I'm guessing this lovely maid is your submissive?"

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"A pleasure as well, Archer. You're hosting a fine event tonight. My dear, introduce yourself to Archer." She said focusing on the otter who stepped forward and bowed. Thistle couldn't help but notice it was deeper than the bow she had received.

"Greetings sir. I'm Olivia, my lady's doll and servant."

Archer nodded but focused on Magnolia. "You always trained them well. So why was my pet with you? Has she caused you some trouble?" Thistle wanted to hit him but held her position. She wasn't being upstaged by Olivia.

"Quite the opposite. I was wishing to discuss taking her off yours and Melody's hands. I have been seeking a new project and she would be perfect."

Okay fuck behaving. If Archer even humored this she was biting his leg. And that was before she got home and was his girlfriend again.

"You're one of the clubs oldest members, Magnolia. You know how rarely I play with a submissive let alone collar one. Clearly my answer is no."

"I was hoping that habit of short dalliances would have made you grow tired of her."

"I doubt I will ever grow tired of this one nor would Melody. She stirs feelings in me that are terrifying and exciting. But perhaps I can talk with Melody and we can set up a play date in the future?"

Magnolia was impossible to read with a calculating look before she smiled. "It was worth a shot. She is a fine thing. You have an excellent eye. Please get in contact about that play date."

"Will do."

"Come along, Oliva. Have a good evening, Archer."

Archer stayed quiet as the pair vanished from sight. Then he spoke. "Most people wouldn't have noticed how tense you were. Were you scared I was going to give you away, pet?" He teased.

"I was surprised by the proposal, Master."

"Still a terrible liar. Stand, pet."

She got up to her feet, assuming her standing posture. She was back to trying to be the perfect sub.

"Where is Melody? I thought she was coming with you?"

"She did, Master. She sent me to find you as she checked on staff."

Archer shook his head. "Why is she working tonight?" He muttered more to himself.

"Maybe it was a trick." Melody's voice spoke up as she popped into view behind Archer. "Maybe I wanted to see how this one behaved when we weren't around."

She spun around Archer to be beside Thistle, a hand scratching her back through the body suit.

"Testing her tonight?" Archer asked as if surprised. "Then did you see her with Magnolia before they reached me?"

"I did."

"Was she behaved?"

"Like an angel. Maybe her brat side is the act and she really is a perfect little submissive."

An announcement went through the club as a new act came on the stage nearest to them. The three turned to watch as a man tied up a rather pretty girl in elaborate rope work.

"Shibari is gorgeous, isn't it?" Melody whispered into her ear. "Would you like to be up there? Getting tied up for all these people?"

Thistle watched the act for a second before answering. "I like the rope part but I don't think I could handle the being watched part tonight, Mistress."

She wasn't against public play. That was perfectly clear. But tonight was a big night. She was nervous she would mess up. Being on that stage posed too many risks tonight.

"Hmm." Was Melody's response. She moved from Thistle's side to Archer's far side. The two talked in hushed whispers as the both shot her the odd glance.

Finally, Archer fully focused on her. "Pet, follow."

They led her to the playroom section of the club. She knew exactly what this meant and butterflies filled her stomach in anticipation of what was to come. They greeted the attendant and grabbed a key. They went down the hallway stopping at a room near the very back. Archer opened the door letting them in.

The room was dimly lit with concrete walls and floor. Hooks dangled from the ceiling and various sexual contraptions were scattered about. On one wall sat metal shelves filled with all sorts of toys like torturer's instruments.

Melody headed for the shelves as Archer focused on Thistle.

"Strip." Was his one-word command.

She did without hesitation. There was an energy tonight. They would not tolerate a mistake even in private. So, her clothes became a neatly folded pile on the floor. Just then Melody returned, hands full of rope.

"You want to tell her, or should I?" She asked Archer.

"I will. You handle the hard part." Melody shrugged and got up on Thistle. She started measuring and working the rope. She began to place the rope on Thistle.

"It has been a period of adjustment these last two weeks." Archer started taking her attention back. "But you've done perfectly. So, we've decided to reward you with a proper dungeon play session. Name three things you want to happen and we'll do them on top of what we want."

She was being rewarded? And got to choose three things? This felt like a trap. But Melody didn't speak as she continued working with the rope, and Archer looked serious.

"Pain." She stated. It been a while since proper pain. Her punishments she had received wasn't what she wanted either. She wanted to be cut and marked. Made bloody. She craved it and had gone too long without it.

Archer nodded. "And your two other things?"

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"Both of you at once. And no edging." It made her laugh in her head that she wanted to be hurt but not edged. What an odd world she lived in.

"Sounds like a fun list." Melody commented from behind her, where she had shifted to.

"I agree." Archer added. "Now let your Mistress finish her work."

Melody was taking her time on the harness she was creating. Loops of rope and series of knots. Each second that passed the more rope Thistle could feel against her. The rope went all over her torso and down her legs. Nothing too tight but it was there. After a painstakingly long time Melody finally stood back.

"Well, that may be my best work." She announced.

Archer nodded in agreement. "It's as good as that showman." Thistle could only stand there, no idea how good it looked.

"Move to the center of the room, pet."

She shuffled over more from nerves than the restrictiveness of the ropes. It was Archer's turn to take over. He took the remaining rope from Melody and started to work it around the hooks. He checked and double checked his work before nodding. Thistle may have never done this before but she knew what was about to happen.

"You ready, sweetie?" Melody asked, moving right in front of her.

"Yes, Mistress." She was scared but not going back. She wasn't about to use her new safe words because of something like this.

Archer yanked on the rope and her feet lifted off the ground. Another pull than her torso this time. She was parallel to floor, inches above it. A few more tugs and she rose higher. She went from Melody's feet to her waist. That seemed to be the perfect height as she didn't move anymore as Archer worked. He walked around smirking at his handy work.

"She really does make good dΓ©cor doesn't she, Mel." He teased.

"She does but we can spruce her up a bit." Melody responded, matching his energy.

"Shall we then?" The two walked away leaving her staring at the door. She had nothing to do but listen as they fiddled with something. It was incredibly boring but she stayed quiet. She didn't want to ruin her chance for her reward. Maybe that was why they had given it to her so she would behave.

Archer was first to reappear, a blindfold in hand. "I don't think you need your eyes for this, pet." He put it on her head, plunging her into darkness. But just as a sharp pain shot through her nipple.

"Fuck!" She yelled instantly remembering the pain of nipple clamps. She was sure she heard a giggle but then another stabbing pain clouded her mind as the second clamp was placed.

But there was something different. She could feel them being jostled. Causing pain but also showing that there was something attached to them. She got her answer when a third clamp snapped onto her clit.

"Shit! Fuck!" She screamed. This was nothing compared to the clamps. She had asked for pain but fucking hell this was intense. And as the pain was starting to subside a bit the chain moved shooting pain through all three clamps. She screamed, not able to speak. The only response she heard was laughter.

"I think she likes them." Melody teased.

"I think so. But she can handle more." Archer answered.

"Agreed."

She heard footsteps, Melody's heels became distinct on the concrete floor. There was the sound of zipper. Who was stripping? Melody or Archer? Being in the dark, her clit and nipple throbbing in pain was infuriating. She couldn't even move, bound and suspended from the floor. She had to wait for whatever these two were planning.

It finally came to light as something firm pressed against her lips. "Suck it, baby girl." Melody whispered, her voice full of arousal.

Thistle opened her mouth letting Melody slam the strap on down her throat. It hit the back and just as it did a whoosh sound filled the room. But that was forgotten as something hard and flat connected with her ass. The pain was immediate. Not as bad as the cane but still rough. It made the dildo go down further in her throat causing her to cough and gag. She tried to move her body to get some air but a hand buried in her hair holding her in place.

"I know you can take it. Breath though your nose." Melody instructed.

She had to focus on it but she started to breathe through her nose. Her focus was broken as Melody started to thrust, as if she was trying to push the dildo all the way down her throat. Just as she buried as deep as she could a second crack on her ass made her lurch forward. She moaned against the dildo unable to express her pain.

The two seemed to be fully into sync after that. Archer would wait for Melody to get a few thrusts in and when she had forced her dildo down Thistle's throat, he would strike. Each blow not only lit up her ass but moved the clamps shooting pain throughout her body. She couldn't scream with the dildo buried in throat so drool dripped out of her mouth as she became a hot mess. She asked for pain but didn't realize how intense it would be. As they finished Archer brushed a finger over her pussy, feeling how wet she was. She couldn't hide how turned on she was.

"What's next, Archie?" Melody asked, her breathing labored. She had been ruining Thistle's throat with hard thrusts, so it was to be expected that she was tired.

"I've got an idea." Archer replied.

The two were back to working together. She felt herself starting to be lowered feet first. As her feet touched the floor, Melody took her in her arms. Thistles head was tucked between Melody's breasts but she was too sore to be excited. She was lowered the rest of the way down and Melody helped her lay on the floor. To her surprise, new suspension ropes were soon tied up with both of them hard at work.

Once secure she was lifted again, this time her back to the floor. What was more of a surprise was rope tied to her ankles and used to spread her legs apart. She was inches above the floor completely opened. But the surprises didn't stop there. Her clamps were carefully removed giving her sore nipples and clit a welcome break. But then new ones just as painful snapped into place on her nipples. She yelped but it wasn't too bad.

That was until the chain started to move. Instantly the clamps started to pull up following the chain. She moaned in pain as her nipples were stretched. Her safe word played on her lips but as she was about to say it the pulling stopped. Her nipples were stretched out, the gentlest movement now causing fresh pain.

"I think she's good now." Archer said, his dress shoes pacing around her.

"She took it so well." Melody replied scratching her ear.

"Of course she did. She's our perfect little girl. Shall we reward her?"

"I think she's earned it."

More footsteps, more suspense. Then a strong hand guiding her head down, bending it at an angle. "Let's see how much Melody stretched your throat."

She opened her mouth wide as his cock pressed at her lips. He was not slow about slamming it down her throat but she took it with ease. Up until the point that she was pressed against her nose. He was fully erect, a salty taste on its tip already. She breathed through her nose, ready to be face fucked. But that didn't happen he just held her there.

Then something was pressing against her pussy. Entering it as easily as Archer entered her mouth. It was a massive dildo spreading her open and burying itself in her. She heard Melody make a moan or some sort of noise.

"Fuck, I forgot how much I love double sided dildos." She muttered in a voice lost in lust.

Then in sync they began. Archer pulled out and thrust in as Melody did the opposite motions. Thistle's mind was blown. At any given time, a dildo or a cock was plowing into her as another pulled out. She was being taken in both holes as rough as possible, like a toy. She couldn't moan, whimper, or make any noise with her lips around Archer and her legs were forced open to take Melody.

"It's called spit roasting." Archer said it in that perfectly sexy voice he got when he was horny. "With how good it feels you better get used to it. I feel like we'll be doing it a lot."

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