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Carnal Pt 06

Carnal Pt 06

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Thistle was determined heading into Carnal. Archer had given her a break for the day after their night together to get himself readjusted. She had used it to think over things. She was getting tired of these major events happening in her life without having a semblance of control. So, when he summoned her to the club, she decided to get some back.

She arrived an hour early, greeting the ever-cheerful Milo out front. But she didn't beeline for Archer's office. No, she went straight to the bar. She found the gaggle of bartenders and got her plan into motion. If she was going to be part of this pack she was going to get to know every member on some level. No matter how long it took.

So, she talked. Rayne was about to break up with her boyfriend since he didn't like her working at Carnal. Lennox was deep into his master's degree in chemical engineering. In the staging room she found Ms. Marie who gushed about her first grandbaby. She listened to it all knowing each connection made her a little less reliant on Archer in this new world.

She finished by greeting Archer's door guard, a massive bear called Rory. She had never spoken to him and he turned out to be a complete softy. He talked about his two daughters and wife so much that she was almost late. With five minutes to spare she finally entered Archer's office.

He was at his desk which was no surprise. What was surprising was the rather large bull sitting in the lounge area fiddling with some tools. She was curious but took her position on her knees in front of his desk.

"Greeting Master, may I be of use to you?" She asked as properly as she could muster. There were other parts to her new game plan.

Archer looked over at Thistle and got up walking in front of her.

"Evening pet. I saw that you were running all over the club for the last hour."

"Yes, Master." She was not teasing or coy, just matching the dynamic he insisted on when at the club. She was starting to learn the two sides of Archer and how to handle them.

"What were you up to?"

"Greeting people and just talking, Master."

She could see him clench his jaw. He wasn't enjoying her new submissive act. He liked her bratty side as he was able to outmaneuver her with ease. Not anymore. Besides there was company, she couldn't embarrass him in front of company.

"You learn anything?" The edge was in his voice, as if he could break through the act to find her weak spot.

"Nothing worth mentioning to you, Master. I was getting to know the pack I'm part of now."

His jaw loosened as his smirk returned. That wasn't good. It meant he had found his move, gotten the upper hand.

"Then I should introduce you to Steph, another member of the pack." He gestured to the bull that gave too cute of a wave for someone as intimidating as him.

"Hey." Steph said.

"Hi, sir." She replied, keeping up her role until she figured out what Archer's game was. She didn't have to wait long as Archer carried on speaking.

"Steph here is a talented body piercer. He'll be piercing your ears today." Archer said in a voice that oozed smugness.

But for Thistle, ice tore through her veins. She had just told Archer about her fear of needles. Now he was ordering her to do this. Was the nice guy act a cruel trick to get ammo to break her. Had the jokes and conversations hidden the monster underneath? Perhaps the Archer outside of work was never the real him but this was?

"Master.... I told you recently that I'm scared of needles." She stammered out, a mixture of fear and betrayal making her eyes water.

"You did." He agreed, showing he remembered their talk.

"Then why are you making me do this?"

"Why?" Archer said, playing up the word. He snatched a paper off his desk and held it up. She recognized it, her list of hard limits she filled out on her first day.

"I told you to take this seriously, to put all your hard limits. But I don't see your fear of needles on here. You clearly half assed it. This is the first safety net for your health both mentally and physically. It guides my decisions. And since you took it so haphazardly, I figured you would want to get your ears pierced and face your fear."

He got louder the longer he spoke, and she started shaking. She had seen him in so many different ways during their few days together but never mad. She had fucked up bad.

"I'm sorry." She muttered.

"You're sorry now because it's coming back to bite you in the ass. Do you know how horrified I was to find out I could have done something to hurt you? I trusted you and this list and you broke that trust."

The anger had vanished as quickly as it had risen. There was only concern there now. She could see the fear now. She glanced at Steph who awkwardly watched on. Funny enough she loved how piercings looked and had always wanted them. But could never face her fear. Perhaps it was time to do that, offer an apology that meant something.

"If I willingly get my ears pierced, will it suffice as an apology?" She asked, unable to meet his eyes.

"It will go a long way to healing the trust that has been damaged. But you will still be punished. You need to have this lesson grilled into you. I told you that communication was key on our first day. It seems you need a sterner reminder. If you refuse, then I...I cannot see you continuing in this role."

It would be over? Would that mean it all would be? She would be kicked out of a world she had just gotten a taste for? No more dinners or store visits? The mark on her neck a reminder for nothing? She didn't even dare ask. There was only one path forward for her. She would take whatever he deemed fit her crime.

"I understand, Master. I'll take the punishment." She offered, trying to hide the fear in her voice.

Archer studied her and nodded. "Good. Steph, she's all yours."

"Right miss if you would sit here." He patted a chair so out of place it clearly was brought in just for this. She slumped her shoulders as she rose before heading over. She had not felt this level of shame since her school days. She took her seat, not daring to look at Steph or his tools. Hearing him fiddle was enough to get her to shake once more.

"Now I know you're scared of needles but a lot of my clients are. I promise you don't even have to look as I work." He started in a voice that would be soothing in any other context. "All you will feel is a pinch just like this."

Two fingers squished her ear making her jolt. But not from pain, just surprise. It wasn't bad. No worse than claws digging into her hips or raking her chest. If she couldn't see the needle, then perhaps she could do this. Her wobbly knees said otherwise.

"Now Miss, is there anything you want in particular?"

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None wasn't an option, she needed to do this. Not for Archer but for herself now. To conquer a fear that had crippled her desires. But she didn't want to think about it until it was over. "I'm comfortable with Master Archer deciding for me.

Steph didn't respond. She heard him get up as she focused on her breathing. She heard muffled voices but did her best to not eavesdrop. The less she knew the better. He returned, did more prep. Then he spoke.

"Ok, I'm all ready to go. I'll be as quick as possible, Miss."

She held her breath, waiting. She held it so long she was sure she was turning blue. When the pain came it was no worse than his pinch or Archer's over eager claws. She could do this.

The sensation of getting the piercing put in was odd but he was soon moving on. Piercing after piercing, down her ear. Then the other ear got a similar treatment. He kept his word, working fast and silent. By the end her shakes had stopped and the pit in her stomach was long gone. She had done it.

"We're all done miss and you look great. Would you like to see?" He held up a mirror and she was eager to see his work. But before she could Archer's voice rose up.

"She can see them once her punishment is complete." He ordered. Steph gave her a look that was sympathetic and embarrassed as he put the mirror away. She didn't like Archer treating him like that but she couldn't say anything. Just a note to bring up later if she survived the night.

"Sorry, Sir. I'll leave some saline on the table with instructions on care. You did great and nice meeting you."

"Same, Sir." She offered with a smile that tried to apologize for Archer's lack of manners

"Pet, kneel in front of me." Archer barked as if on cue. She scrambled over not needing to anger him. She needed to be perfect tonight, to atone for her crime.

Archer looked over her new piercings. "You once joked about how much jewelry I could get you to wear. It seems like quite a lot. Steph." He said shifting his attention to the bull who was packing up.

"Thank you for your expert work. She looks perfect and I'll have her text you later on what she thinks about them."

Steph seemed to beam at that. Was praise from Archer rare? "Not a problem, Sir. I'll see you around." She kept her focus on Archer as Steph finished packing up and left. Leaving her alone with Archer. He lifted her chin, getting a closer look at her ears.

"Perhaps I should have had him do you nipples too." He said speaking more to himself than her. "No, I have too many plans for them. Your clit then. A dirty secret reminder of your punishment tonight."

She may be better with needles now but that was a bridge too far. She bit her tongue hoping he would drop the idea. It seemed to work.

"Strip, pet." Was his next order. She was getting used to being naked at Carnal. Her dress for the night and underwear slipped off quickly before she knelt before him once more.

"How do you feel, pet?"

"My ears ache but I can handle it, Master."

He kneeled down and fiddled with the o ring on her collar. Finished with his task, he rose with one of the golden tags in his hand. She could see her name flashing between his fingers.

"Tonight, you are not Thistle or even my pet. You are a whore and will be addressed as one. You will remain as one until I deemed your punishment is complete. Do you understand?"

"Yes, Master."

"What are you?"

"A whore, Master." She answered, ignoring the heat in her cheeks.

"Exactly. Now follow me on your knees. Whores don't deserve to walk." He turned, heading off. Not seeing if she was following. He knew she would. He led her right out the door, past Rory. She had introduced herself to the guard and now he saw her like this. Tonight was going to be full of such embarrassment she felt.

He led her down the hallway. Her hands began to ache and her breasts swung underneath her but she carried on. She was not calling quits. He greeted staff members as they strolled by who she didn't dare look at. Finally, they reached a part of the club she didn't know and was led into a room. It was pitch black expect the center being lit up in bright lights.

"I think you can figure out where to stand, whore." Archer said moving to the side of the room. She wasn't sure what his game was yet but it didn't matter. Tonight wasn't about getting the upper hand, it was taking whatever he threw at her.

She shuffled over and stood in her standing position in the bright lights. She could barely see Archer fiddling with something over by the wall. He removed his jacket and shirts, topless like the other night. When he turned her breath caught in her throat. He was wearing a mask covering the upper half of his face. It dark in color made to look cruel and menacing. Worse still, it made his eyes look hollow, unseeing.

"Do you like the mask, Whore?"

"Yes, Master." She lied. She already missed his eyes, even when they were cold and emotionless.

"Good because I got one for you too." He held up a smaller mask made out black leather with no details. There wasn't even eye holes, meaning she would be blind. But why did he need a mask if he was to blind her with hers?

"You should thank me in third person. A whore isn't a person, just a thing after all. In fact, until you earn your name back you will only speak in third person."

He was truly wanting to humiliate her. But fine. She hated it but he wouldn't break her. Not tonight.

"This whore thanks you for the mask, Master."

No response as he strolled over and secured it to her face, the leather pressing into the top of her muzzle. Her world became darkness but she took deep breaths calming herself. She kept repeating to herself that she could handle this.

Her ears perked following his footsteps to the side. The sound of chains clanging followed him as he came back. Okay so it's bondage. Even with chains she was fine with that. The restraint he put on her was thick leather, dwarfing her wrist but holding her tight. He secured it then walked off again. Then a new noise and the chain began to move. It lifted her arm, not stopping until it was straight out, t posing. She could struggle but it was not budging.

Her other arm received similar treatments. Then her legs. Chains pulling them apart, exposing her. But she didn't protest. No sass or smart remarks. Not even a noise. Nothing to disappoint him more and make this worse.

"So quiet, whore." Archer said, noticing her silence as he circled her. "Even if you behave now, you're getting punished. Ask a question, only one though."

"Wh- "But she was cut off by a hand covering her mouth.

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"Third person, whore or you'll lose that question." Right the stupid third person thing. That slowed her down thinking of how to ask the question.

"The whore would like to know why you're wearing a mask when she is blinded by hers." Fuck she was hating this for so many reasons.

"A smart question. I've been debating about putting TVs in the club showing erotic performances. I figured you would be perfect for test footage. I was kind enough to hide your face despite how much more attention your beauty would bring. You should thank me honestly."

Of course. He had finally shown his hand. It was too be everything at once. Humiliation, bondage, putting her on display. He was doing everything he could to punish her.

"The whore thanks you."

"For once you're polite. Shall we continue?"

"The whore will let you decide."

"Perfect response. Let's carry on."

His footsteps moved away again. She waited for him to return, seconds ticking by. Then it happened as soon as he reached her something brushed against her pussy. She couldn't help but shudder.

"Despite this being a punishment, you're soaking wet. Isn't that perfect for a whore like you." She could guess where he was going, a punishment from before. But it wasn't. This was something new. A heavy object was strapped to her leg, a rubber tip pressed against her pussy. Cool and unmoving.

Then his attention turned to her ass. This was the same as before. Cold lubed fingers probing, stretching her. Then a plug pressed in. It felt larger than before but she could be remembering wrong. Either was it awkward and foreign. She would endure though.

"Testing." Archer said done with his work. The toys sprung to life. One vibrating against her pussy the other deep in her ass. As suspected it was teasing, nothing to send her over. But then they got faster and faster. Soon she was squirming, gasps of air escaping her lips.

"Holy shit is he going to make me cum?" She thought not expecting this at all.

They sped up more, she was almost there. Then they dropped back to the slowest speed, her orgasm snatched away from her. They turned off and she could hear Archers laugh, a cruel sound in the silence.

"I'll say they work perfectly. Let's continue with the rest. She bit her tongue. She refused to get mad or protest in fucking third person.

From somewhere he pulled out rope, weaving it around her torso. It reminded her of the harness she wore her first night but when he pulled it tight it squeezed her breasts. He tightened it some more, checked it, then finished his tasks. Her breasts were tingling but beyond that there seemed like purpose besides decoration.

That was until a nipple clam snapped shut on her. The pain was ten-fold what it had been last time, causing her to break her silence with a yelp. Her bindings held firm and she couldn't squirm away. The second fell in place and she couldn't help but speak.

"Fuck." She yelled." Archer just laughed. The pain numbed but if she took a deep breath, it would flair back up. If he did anything to make her move it would be torment.

"You want to back out, whore?"

She shook her head not trusting her words now.

"Very well." He returned to behind her, securing her tail to the bindings around her chest. Finally, he seemed happy.

"All prettied up for the cameras and now it's time to put on a show. Simply put whore I'm going to cane you now."

He paused to let it sink in. Caning was a whole new region of kink. She liked pain but that was when it was mixed with pleasure. This would be pain by itself. Could she handle this? She had to try.

"You'll talk eighteen." He carried on in a dramatic tone. "You'll count them as I strike. Miss a count and I restart. Do you understand, whore?"

"The whore understands." She replied, her voice shaky exposing her nerves.

"Then let's begin."

It wasn't the cane she felt first but the toys coming back to life. A cruel pleasure in all ways. A tease, a calm before the storm. Worse it made her breasts shake, the clamps digging in hard on her bound breasts. But that pain vanished as the cane cracked through the air.

Archer spanking her was the only comparison she had. But that pain was spread over an area the size of his hand. This was focused on a small strip that crossed her ass cheek. It was like fire being branded into her flesh, cast in an instant. It was intense and horrible, event her clamps couldn't compete.

"What are you supposed to do whore?" Archer asked.

"One, Master." She mumbled still in shock.

The second was across her other ass cheek, the same sudden burst of pain following the crack of the cane. She let out a whimper, her muscles clenching at the impact.

"Two." Only two. How was she supposed to survive sixteen more of these.

But then the toys surged to their height mixing pleasure into the pain. She couldn't help but shake, her body nearly reaching an orgasm. The perfect counter to her sore ass. But as before they slowed right before she reached there. Cruelly teasing before a third strike cracked through the air.

"Three." She cried in frustration and pain. Luckily the fourth strike came before the toys could come back up to speed. She called out its number. It hurt but she was adjusting, she could do this. With the toys, clamps, and cane she was being overwhelmed. The combination of them was numbing the impact of each. Making this survivable.

That was until the fifth strike connected. It landed perfectly with where she had been struck before. The pain was searing and as she jolted forward, her clamps biting deeper into her abused nipples. Her eyes watered and she could do nothing to stop them.

"Five."

The next two came at the height of the toys speed but it did nothing to numb the pain. They hit the same spot one after another. Her head slumped and she wondered if she should call it, beg him to stop. But despite the pain she didn't want to give up everything she had gained being his submissive. A friend in Melody, excitement, and Archer no matter how much of a monster he was. She wasn't stopping.

Strike eight came as she lifted her head and she let herself make a noise at that pain. Embarrassment wasn't a concern anymore. Any option was on the table to help her endure this, to pay for her mistakes.

"Eight." Ten more to go. She wondered what would hurt more at the end her ass or nipples.

The toys were slow when nine came in. It felt harder than his previous blows but that could be her sore ass talking. She cried out the number, the first tear traveling down her face.

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