At the conclusion of Pt 14, I suggested that 15 would focus on what became of Elliot. Sometimes I think I am going in one direction only to find myself wanting suddenly to explore somewhere else. I think this story has 1 or 2 more additions prior to its conclusion. I hope you enjoy it.
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I do have a suggestion for those not enjoying it, however. Should you find this story is not to your liking, stop reading it.
Lastly, someone recently commented about their disappointment about how the story lacked sufficient romance and "love." I've received a couple of comments like this.
They made me smile.
This is a work of deeply troubling, erotic fiction, offered to you free of charge. This is a fucked up story for those of us who get off on some twisted stuff. As much as I love it, I'd not want to be any of the characters in this story. If you are looking for a narrative about the purity of spiritual love and sex, this is not it.
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This story takes place in the Perfect Beginning Universe. It makes brief mention of Michele's work.
For me, first time is always the most exciting. Compounding the excitement is the anxiety when at least one character realizes that they are not the person they thought they were.
This story takes place in a very male dominant society, one which is even more patriarchal than our own. Pete comes to realize that as he falls under Allison's spell, he does not measure up to societal expectations. These two young people are discovering and becoming as they grow together as a couple.
Psychological conflict and tension are central themes in this story.
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The following is an outline of how this society operates. The Perfect Beginning provides a slightly more comprehensive description of the universe.
* People are legal adults at 18 years of age.
* People usually live to about 2,000 years of age.
* The cultural norm has almost all legal adults living with their family of origin until they turn 200 years old.
* Young people between the ages of 18 and 200 are treated as and referred to as children when they choose to continue living with their parents.
* Young people between the ages of 18 and 200 often behave much as we would expect teenagers to behave here in our world. They are kept in a state of arrested emotional development.
* Young people between the ages of 18 and 200 years customarily consume "blockers" which prevent them from having sexual feelings or impulses.
* Some young people will begin to "date" around 160 yers of age and while they are expected to continue to take their blockers, some will surreptitiously stop taking them while a few will stop responding to them.
* Age and masculinity are revered in this world. Everybody looks up to their elders and few seriously question the patriarchy.
All characters in the story are over 18 years of age.
It is customary for those below the age of 200 to demonstrate their status by wearing clothing which signify to others that they are off limits. They would wear what we would think of as children's clothing. Remember, an 18 year old and a 1,900 year old would look exactly the same age, so children's clothes are very useful for signaling to those over 200 years to abstain from any romantic or sexual pursuit of another who was deemed of an inappropriate age.
Lastly, sex is not technically illegal for people between the ages of 18 and 200 years. It is considered profoundly taboo. Adult-children (18+) do have sex but it is kept very quiet. Some parents punish their children for engaging in this sinful pleasure and adult-children almost never tell-on one another in this regard, even those who might not like one another. Adult children live by a code and violation of said code subjects one to complete ostracization. Almost none experiment until they are well over 160 years old.
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"Oh my god, you are so needy."
He'd just asked her if she wanted a food rub while she did her homework.
"I thought maybe you'd like it."
"No." She continued peering over the top of her book, "You want to rub my feet for yourself. You were only thinking about yourself. You know how I feel about selfishness. I mean, is that something we all are just suddenly okay with?"
He had to turn his head, just then, to look out the window. This was insane.
She treats me like a servant! How does she even...! How can she say...!
"Look at me when I speak to you!" said crossly.
He quickly steadied his breathing and redirected his attention to Allison.
Looking huffy, she slapped him quite hard across the face. "You know better than to look away when I'm speaking to you, young man. I'll not tolerate disobedience on top of disrespect. Gracious!"
He faced her but his eyes were down cast. With his chin remaining down, he raised his eyes timidly, "Yes, Miss. I apologize, Miss"
Peter was beyond situational confusion. Much of the time he was so out of his mind horny for his babysitter that her outrageous demands were unquestioned.
Because Allison says.
They kept him perpetually aroused. He was a hypersexual and prior to his current situation, he needed to get himself off at minimum eight times a day, but often a lot more. This was how he remained regulated and relatively clear headed. The women would not allow this and he was kept without relief for days at a time. Unfortunately they saw to it that relief, when it came, was not really relief at all.
Yet he did have clear moments when he saw objectively how insane were many of the demands put upon him. He saw how insane his life truly was. He saw how insane was his own reaction to it all. Often this occurred when none of the women were around. Sometimes it occurred right in the moment of his situational craziness. This was such an occasion.
